Writing Formal and Informal Letters. Part 1. Домбровская И.В - 25 стр.

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will be 40 a day plus petrol and insurance. It's the cheapest. But we'll have to rent
a car and will have to find parks often. If we go here by coach, the cost will be 45
unless we go there on friday or Saturday. But it'll take us about 10 hours. So shall
we go there by train. The cost will be 75 unless we go there on friday or Satur-
day. It'll take us about five hours. We can spend most of the time in Edinburgh. I'm
going to get the tickets and am planning about what we do there. If you have ques-
tions or good idea, call or write me as soon as possible. Otherwise see you next
month. Look forward to seeing you
Love Louise
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Dear Christine,
Thank you for your letter, which I got yesterday. I was surpraised that you and
Juan are deceided to coma to visit me next month. You couldn't have chosen a bet-
ter time because I'll have my hafe-term brake from school so I'll be able to spend
whole week with you. You have already made a few attempts to find out, the
cheapest way to get to Edinburgh, as you said you wanted to see this place. In my
opinion, the best way is to get a train from Cambridge to Edingburgh, because the
journey is quite long and tairing. However, this is not the cheapest one.
Another way to get there is by coach but the time will be there is late evening or
early morning and we'll have to travel for whole night and I know how you hate
traveling by coach. There is another possibility to travel there, which is hiring a
car, it is quite cheap and convinient but I can't drive here and so you because of
right-hand driving. I hope all the inforrmation which I provide here will help you
to make the right deciedion. I can't wait to see you here, I'm sure we'll have a grate
time. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Love
Julia
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will be ₤ 40 a day plus petrol and insurance. It's the cheapest. But we'll have to rent
a car and will have to find parks often. If we go here by coach, the cost will be ₤ 45
unless we go there on friday or Saturday. But it'll take us about 10 hours. So shall
we go there by train. The cost will be ₤ 75 unless we go there on friday or Satur-
day. It'll take us about five hours. We can spend most of the time in Edinburgh. I'm
going to get the tickets and am planning about what we do there. If you have ques-
tions or good idea, call or write me as soon as possible. Otherwise see you next
month. Look forward to seeing you
Love Louise

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Dear Christine,
Thank you for your letter, which I got yesterday. I was surpraised that you and
Juan are deceided to coma to visit me next month. You couldn't have chosen a bet-
ter time because I'll have my hafe-term brake from school so I'll be able to spend
whole week with you. You have already made a few attempts to find out, the
cheapest way to get to Edinburgh, as you said you wanted to see this place. In my
opinion, the best way is to get a train from Cambridge to Edingburgh, because the
journey is quite long and tairing. However, this is not the cheapest one.
Another way to get there is by coach but the time will be there is late evening or
early morning and we'll have to travel for whole night and I know how you hate
traveling by coach. There is another possibility to travel there, which is hiring a
car, it is quite cheap and convinient but I can't drive here and so you because of
right-hand driving. I hope all the inforrmation which I provide here will help you
to make the right deciedion. I can't wait to see you here, I'm sure we'll have a grate
time. Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Love
Julia

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