Методические указания по составлению и оформлению научного доклада на профессиональную тему на английском языке. Малетина Л.В. - 17 стр.

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A8 — Read the following conclusions and select the best one for the report.
Example A
Conclusions
This report introduced two environmentally-friendly designs for a car. We presented information
about the engine and fuel, materials, safety and accessories and provided sketches for each car.
These cars would be more expensive than normal family cars, but it is important to develop
cleaner technology for the future.
Example B
Conclusions
Two alternative designs for an emission-free fuel cell powered car have been presented: Car A, a
luxury sedan which runs on hydrogen, and Car B, a medium-sized family hatch which uses
hydrogen and oxygen. Each car features recyclable materials and conforms to Australian design
standards in terms of performance and safety features. However, Car B is recommended as it was
found to be more economical in terms of both manufacturing and running costs.
Sourse: http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/writing/engineering/technical-report/6.1.xml
4. KEY
A4
Reference list B is better.
Reference list A is weak. The heading is
incorrect and the References section should be
given a section number. The entries are neither
listed alphabetically (author-date system) nor
numbered (numbering system). The
information in the entries is presented in
random order; one referencing style should be
chosen and the correct format applied
consistently. Library call numbers are not
given in any referencing style. The URL alone
is not sufficient for online sources. The
author's name (where available), the name of
the site or page, the copyright date, and the
date you accessed the page should all be given.
A5
Option A is best. Option B does not give any
indication of what the designs are for. Some
titles need both the assignment name and the
topic of the work done
A6
Introduction A is weak. It confuses the project
with the report (the project is the work you did,
while the report is the document which
presents the work). There is no background
information to set the topic in context, and the
topic itself is not clearly stated. The design
criteria and key features of the designs are not
mentioned, and no structure outline is given.
Also, the section number is not given in the
heading.
A7 Option 2