Лексические, грамматические и стилистические проблемы перевода. Калинкина С.К. - 30 стр.

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know you!" The "bounder" spoke: "Hello!" he said. "You fellows. Look!
There's my young rascal of a son!" (J.G.)
2. His lawyer, my good friend and relation, Clarence Choate Clark, Esq.,
now of the District of Columbia bar, in asking me to edit the manuscript, based
his request on a clause in his client's will which empowered my eminent cousin
to use his discretion in all matters pertaining to the preparation of "Lolita" for
print. (V.N.)
3. "… it has been cold here for the last few days. I'm having a time … "
"The dumb child," said Mrs. Humbert, "has left out a word before "time". (V.N.)
4. The young man, who, at the end of September, 1924, dismounted
from a taxicab in South Square, Westminster, was so unobtrusively American
that his driver had some hesitation in asking for double his fare. The young
man had no hesitation in refusing it. (J.G.)
5. "The people here are a funny lot. They don't seem to have any use for
us and I don't seem to have any use for them. They call as Pommies and treat us
as if we'd took a liberty in coming to their blooming country." (J.G.)
6. "Here we are, Anne." An English voice, and two young people at the
far end – going to chatter, he supposed! He was preparing to rise when he heard
the girl say, in a voice American, indeed, but soft and curiously private: "John,
it's terribly great!" (J.G.)
7. Reaching his hotel, he went at once toward the kiosk in the hall where
you could buy newspapers, tooth-paste, "candy" to pull your teeth out … list of
arrivals? Here it was: "Hotel Potomac: … Mr. Semmes Forsyth; Mr. and Mrs.
Munt." … Forsyth! Munt! They never could get anything right in the papers!
(J.G.)
8. Old Jolyon's coachman, after driving June and Bosinney to the thea-
tre, had remarked to the butler: "I dunno what to make of 'im . looks to me for
all the world like an 'alf-tame leopard." (J.G.)
9. "Er – how are you?" he said in his dandified way, aspirating the "h"
strongly (this difficult letter absolutely safe in his keeping) – "how are you?"
(J.G.)
10. "I'm going down to my river house for a long holiday. I want you both
to come there presently and stay… You will, won't you?" "It will be veree
nice." A pretty little roll of that "r", but no enthusiasm. (J.G.)
11. "You will see by the enclosed newspaper cutting that I obtained my
decree of divorce to-day. By the English law I shall not, however, be free to
marry again till the decree is confirmed six months hence. In the meanwhile I
have the honour to ask to be considered a formal suitor for the hand of your
daughter". (J.G.)
12. "That Monsieur Dartie," said Annette in the cab, "je n'aime pas ce
type-la!" "No, by George !" said Soames. "Your sister is veree amiable, and the
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girl is pretty. Your father is veree old. I think your mother has trouble with him;
I should not like to be her." (J.G.)
13. "Dear me, I've picked up endless Americanisms. I say "guy" and "do
you have". (I.M.)
14. "How's Mother?" she asked dutifully. I said the doctors did not quite
know yet what the trouble was. Anyway, something abdominal. Abominable?
No, abdominal. (V.N.)
15. We drove on. "The fruithead!" remarked Lo. "He should have nabbed
you." "Why me for heaven's sake?" "Well, the speed in this bum state is fifty,
and – No, don't slow down, you, dull bulb. He's gone now." "We have still
quite a stretch," I said, "and I want to get there before dark. So be a good girl."
"Bad, bad girl" said Lo comfortably. "Juvenile delickwent, but frank and
fetching." (V.N.)
16. "We liked the songs around the fire in the big stone fireplace or under
the darned stars, where every girl merged her own spirit of happiness with the
voice of the group." "Your memory is excellent, Lo, but I must trouble you to
leave out the swear words." (V.N.)
17. "Now, I do hope that's all, you witty child." "Yep. That's all. No –
wait a sec. We baked in a reflector oven. Isn't that terrific?" "Well, that's
better." "We washed zillions of dishes". Zillions "you know is a schoolmarm's
slang for many-many-many-many." (V.N.)
18. … and there it was, marvelously and inexorably under spectral trees,
at the top of a gravelled drive – the pale place of the Enchanted Hunters …
"Wow! Looks swank!" remarked my vulgar darling squinting at the stucco as
she crept out into the audible drizzle … (V.N.)
19. She said: "Look, let's cut out the kissing game and get something to
eat." … then she crept into my waiting arms … "What's the katter with
misses?" I muttered (word control gone) into her ear. (V.N.)
20. She picked up a book that happened to lie at hand, and with a change
of expression, falsely furrowing her brow inquired: "Do tell me about Ball
Zack, sir. Is he really that good?" (V.N.)
21. "Well," she went on with zest, "as for me, I do smoke, and, as dear
Dr. Pierce used to say: I'm not proud of it but jest love it." (V.N.)
22. They sang "I want to get to Heaven, my long-sought rest." But little
Josephine misunderstood and sang: "I want to get to Heaven, with my long
short dress." (S.Sh.)
23. In the fifteen years Dessard had served aboard the Bretagne, he had
never encountered a situation he had not been able to deal with efficiently and
discreetly. (S.Sh.)
24. And yet, there was an excitement within him, the exhilaration of
embarking on a new life. (S.Sh.)
know you!" The "bounder" spoke: "Hello!" he said. "You fellows. Look!                girl is pretty. Your father is veree old. I think your mother has trouble with him;
There's my young rascal of a son!" (J.G.)                                            I should not like to be her." (J.G.)
         2. His lawyer, my good friend and relation, Clarence Choate Clark, Esq.,           13. "Dear me, I've picked up endless Americanisms. I say "guy" and "do
now of the District of Columbia bar, in asking me to edit the manuscript, based      you have". (I.M.)
his request on a clause in his client's will which empowered my eminent cousin              14. "How's Mother?" she asked dutifully. I said the doctors did not quite
to use his discretion in all matters pertaining to the preparation of "Lolita" for   know yet what the trouble was. Anyway, something abdominal. Abominable?
print. (V.N.)                                                                        No, abdominal. (V.N.)
         3. "… it has been cold here for the last few days. I'm having a time … "           15. We drove on. "The fruithead!" remarked Lo. "He should have nabbed
"The dumb child," said Mrs. Humbert, "has left out a word before "time". (V.N.)      you." "Why me for heaven's sake?" "Well, the speed in this bum state is fifty,
         4. The young man, who, at the end of September, 1924, dismounted            and – No, don't slow down, you, dull bulb. He's gone now." "We have still
from a taxicab in South Square, Westminster, was so unobtrusively American           quite a stretch," I said, "and I want to get there before dark. So be a good girl."
that his driver had some hesitation in asking for double his fare. The young         "Bad, bad girl" said Lo comfortably. "Juvenile delickwent, but frank and
man had no hesitation in refusing it. (J.G.)                                         fetching." (V.N.)
         5. "The people here are a funny lot. They don't seem to have any use for           16. "We liked the songs around the fire in the big stone fireplace or under
us and I don't seem to have any use for them. They call as Pommies and treat us      the darned stars, where every girl merged her own spirit of happiness with the
as if we'd took a liberty in coming to their blooming country." (J.G.)               voice of the group." "Your memory is excellent, Lo, but I must trouble you to
         6. "Here we are, Anne." An English voice, and two young people at the       leave out the swear words." (V.N.)
far end – going to chatter, he supposed! He was preparing to rise when he heard             17. "Now, I do hope that's all, you witty child." "Yep. That's all. No –
the girl say, in a voice American, indeed, but soft and curiously private: "John,    wait a sec. We baked in a reflector oven. Isn't that terrific?" "Well, that's
it's terribly great!" (J.G.)                                                         better." "We washed zillions of dishes". Zillions "you know is a schoolmarm's
         7. Reaching his hotel, he went at once toward the kiosk in the hall where   slang for many-many-many-many." (V.N.)
you could buy newspapers, tooth-paste, "candy" to pull your teeth out … list of             18. … and there it was, marvelously and inexorably under spectral trees,
arrivals? Here it was: "Hotel Potomac: … Mr. Semmes Forsyth; Mr. and Mrs.            at the top of a gravelled drive – the pale place of the Enchanted Hunters …
Munt." … Forsyth! Munt! They never could get anything right in the papers!           "Wow! Looks swank!" remarked my vulgar darling squinting at the stucco as
(J.G.)                                                                               she crept out into the audible drizzle … (V.N.)
         8. Old Jolyon's coachman, after driving June and Bosinney to the thea-             19. She said: "Look, let's cut out the kissing game and get something to
tre, had remarked to the butler: "I dunno what to make of 'im . looks to me for      eat." … then she crept into my waiting arms … "What's the katter with
all the world like an 'alf-tame leopard." (J.G.)                                     misses?" I muttered (word control gone) into her ear. (V.N.)
         9. "Er – how are you?" he said in his dandified way, aspirating the "h"            20. She picked up a book that happened to lie at hand, and with a change
strongly (this difficult letter absolutely safe in his keeping) – "how are you?"     of expression, falsely furrowing her brow inquired: "Do tell me about Ball
(J.G.)                                                                               Zack, sir. Is he really that good?" (V.N.)
       10. "I'm going down to my river house for a long holiday. I want you both            21. "Well," she went on with zest, "as for me, I do smoke, and, as dear
to come there presently and stay… You will, won't you?" "It will be veree            Dr. Pierce used to say: I'm not proud of it but jest love it." (V.N.)
nice." A pretty little roll of that "r", but no enthusiasm. (J.G.)                          22. They sang "I want to get to Heaven, my long-sought rest." But little
       11. "You will see by the enclosed newspaper cutting that I obtained my        Josephine misunderstood and sang: "I want to get to Heaven, with my long
decree of divorce to-day. By the English law I shall not, however, be free to        short dress." (S.Sh.)
marry again till the decree is confirmed six months hence. In the meanwhile I               23. In the fifteen years Dessard had served aboard the Bretagne, he had
have the honour to ask to be considered a formal suitor for the hand of your         never encountered a situation he had not been able to deal with efficiently and
daughter". (J.G.)                                                                    discreetly. (S.Sh.)
       12. "That Monsieur Dartie," said Annette in the cab, "je n'aime pas ce               24. And yet, there was an excitement within him, the exhilaration of
type-la!" "No, by George !" said Soames. "Your sister is veree amiable, and the      embarking on a new life. (S.Sh.)

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