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I will send my younger sister to a school or university. It may not be a better
way, but it is the way that my society rewards.
10.9.1.2 Teacher’s Comments
This writing sample is well organized with a good topic sentence and good
support statements. It addresses the question, and does not digress from the topic.
There is a logical progression of ideas. Excellent language proficiency, as evidenced
by a variety of grammatical structures and appropriate vocabulary. There are only a
few grammatical errors that have been corrected below:
Line 7 in favor of
Line 9 are valued
Lines 18 – 19 are valued
Line 28 - would be assured Score:6
10.9.2 Example Test 2
Topic: Suppose that you are required to write a report that includes information
from the graphs printed below. Discuss the relationships between the graphs, and
draw some conclusions. Be sure that your interpretation is supported by information
in the graphs.
Attitudes of high school seniors towards teachers and education
by overall grade averages: 1982
a) “Only a few of my teachers make clear presentations”;
b) “Only a few of my teachers enjoy teaching”;
c) “I am satisfied with my education”.
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10
20
30
40
50
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90
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A average
B average
C average
D average
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I will send my younger sister to a school or university. It may not be a better
way, but it is the way that my society rewards.
10.9.1.2 Teacher’s Comments
This writing sample is well organized with a good topic sentence and good
support statements. It addresses the question, and does not digress from the topic.
There is a logical progression of ideas. Excellent language proficiency, as evidenced
by a variety of grammatical structures and appropriate vocabulary. There are only a
few grammatical errors that have been corrected below:
Line 7 in favor of
Line 9 are valued
Lines 18 – 19 are valued
Line 28 - would be assured Score:6
10.9.2 Example Test 2
Topic: Suppose that you are required to write a report that includes information
from the graphs printed below. Discuss the relationships between the graphs, and
draw some conclusions. Be sure that your interpretation is supported by information
in the graphs.
Attitudes of high school seniors towards teachers and education
by overall grade averages: 1982
90
80
70
60
A average
50
B average
40
C average
30
D average
20
10
0
a b c
a) “Only a few of my teachers make clear presentations”;
b) “Only a few of my teachers enjoy teaching”;
c) “I am satisfied with my education”.
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