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I will send my younger sister to a school or university. It may not be a better
way, but it is the way that my society rewards.
10.9.1.2 Teacher’s Comments
This writing sample is well organized with a good topic sentence and good
support statements. It addresses the question, and does not digress from the topic.
There is a logical progression of ideas. Excellent language proficiency, as evidenced
by a variety of grammatical structures and appropriate vocabulary. There are only a
few grammatical errors that have been corrected below:
Line 7 in favor of
Line 9 are valued
Lines 18 – 19 are valued
Line 28 - would be assured Score:6
10.9.2 Example Test 2
Topic: Suppose that you are required to write a report that includes information
from the graphs printed below. Discuss the relationships between the graphs, and
draw some conclusions. Be sure that your interpretation is supported by information
in the graphs.
Attitudes of high school seniors towards teachers and education
by overall grade averages: 1982
a) “Only a few of my teachers make clear presentations”;
b) “Only a few of my teachers enjoy teaching”;
c) “I am satisfied with my education”.
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Line (35) I will send my younger sister to a school or university. It may not be a better way, but it is the way that my society rewards. 10.9.1.2 Teacher’s Comments This writing sample is well organized with a good topic sentence and good support statements. It addresses the question, and does not digress from the topic. There is a logical progression of ideas. Excellent language proficiency, as evidenced by a variety of grammatical structures and appropriate vocabulary. There are only a few grammatical errors that have been corrected below: Line 7 in favor of Line 9 are valued Lines 18 – 19 are valued Line 28 - would be assured Score:6 10.9.2 Example Test 2 Topic: Suppose that you are required to write a report that includes information from the graphs printed below. Discuss the relationships between the graphs, and draw some conclusions. Be sure that your interpretation is supported by information in the graphs. Attitudes of high school seniors towards teachers and education by overall grade averages: 1982 90 80 70 60 A average 50 B average 40 C average 30 D average 20 10 0 a b c a) “Only a few of my teachers make clear presentations”; b) “Only a few of my teachers enjoy teaching”; c) “I am satisfied with my education”. 115
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