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I will send my younger sister to a school or university. It may not be a better
way, but it is the way that my society rewards.
10.9.1.2 Teacher’s Comments
This writing sample is well organized with a good topic sentence and good
support statements. It addresses the question, and does not digress from the topic.
There is a logical progression of ideas. Excellent language proficiency, as evidenced
by a variety of grammatical structures and appropriate vocabulary. There are only a
few grammatical errors that have been corrected below:
Line 7 in favor of
Line 9 are valued
Lines 18 – 19 are valued
Line 28 - would be assured Score:6
10.9.2 Example Test 2
Topic: Suppose that you are required to write a report that includes information
from the graphs printed below. Discuss the relationships between the graphs, and
draw some conclusions. Be sure that your interpretation is supported by information
in the graphs.
Attitudes of high school seniors towards teachers and education
by overall grade averages: 1982
a) “Only a few of my teachers make clear presentations”;
b) “Only a few of my teachers enjoy teaching”;
c) “I am satisfied with my education”.
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    I will send my younger sister to a school or university. It may not be a better
way, but it is the way that my society rewards.

      10.9.1.2 Teacher’s Comments

     This writing sample is well organized with a good topic sentence and good
support statements. It addresses the question, and does not digress from the topic.
There is a logical progression of ideas. Excellent language proficiency, as evidenced
by a variety of grammatical structures and appropriate vocabulary. There are only a
few grammatical errors that have been corrected below:
     Line 7 in favor of
     Line 9 are valued
     Lines 18 – 19 are valued
     Line 28 - would be assured               Score:6

      10.9.2 Example Test 2

      Topic: Suppose that you are required to write a report that includes information
from the graphs printed below. Discuss the relationships between the graphs, and
draw some conclusions. Be sure that your interpretation is supported by information
in the graphs.

     Attitudes of high school seniors towards teachers and education
     by overall grade averages: 1982

    90
    80
    70
    60
                                                                       A average
    50
                                                                       B average
    40
                                                                       C average
    30
                                                                       D average
    20
    10
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              a            b             c

     a) “Only a few of my teachers make clear presentations”;
     b) “Only a few of my teachers enjoy teaching”;
     c) “I am satisfied with my education”.
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