Лексические, грамматические и стилистические проблемы перевода. Калинкина С.К. - 12 стр.

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65. "You see, he was a Chink – not quite of the best period; but he must
have gone West five hundred years ago at least." (J.G.)
66. An evening spent under the calming influence of Winifred Dartie's
common-sense, and Turkish coffee, which, though "liverish stuff", he always
drank with relish, restored in him something of the feeling that it was a storm in
a teacup. (J.G.)
67. They were going, indeed, at a snail's pace, and through the windows
could see nothing but the faint glow of the street-lamps emerging slowly, high
up, one by one. (J.G.)
68. It seemed funny to stand there reading those words among people
who were reading the same without knowing her from Eve, except, perhaps, by
her clothes. (J.G.)
69. "You're seeing blue to-night, old thing. It'll all seem different
tomorrow." (J.G.)
70. Well, it would be sensible to go and hear things from the horse's
mouth, as it were. (C.D.)
Упр. 5. Обратите внимание на реалии
при переводе следующих предложений
1. Once in his rooms, he dropped into a Morris chair and sat staring
straight before him. (R.A.)
2. Closed in one of her old nightgowns, my Lolita lay on her side with
her back to me, in the middle of the bed. Her lightly veiled body and bare limbs
formed a Z. She had put both pillows under her dark tousled head … (V.N.)
3. "…And perhaps your family doctor might like to examine her
physically – just a routine check-up. She is in Mushroom – the last classroom
along that passage." Beardsley School, it may be explained, copied a famous
girls' school in England by having "traditional" nicknames for its various
classrooms: Mushroom, Room – In 8, B – Room, Room – BA and so on.
(V.N.)
4. Harvey evidently judged to be grown up, proved in fact quite able to
look after himself, and at eighteen won a scholarship to study modern
languages at University College, London. He had elected to spend a year off
before taking up his place and had promptly acquired a bursary to spend four
months studying in Italy. (I.M.)
5. Joan, who had just put down her big umbrella, was wearing a smart
green suit trimmed with narrow bands of grey fur, a black fedora, and high
black boots. (I.M.)
6. "Is he still teaching?" "Yes, he's still teaching, but he's got some
sabbatical leave from his college." (I.M.)
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7. The other girls had some trouble finding their true names. Alethea,
not tolerating "Thea", decided at first for "Alpha", but as this sounded
presumptions, opted finally for "Aleph", the Hebrew name of the first letter of
the alphabet. (I.M.)
8. It was evening. They had had supper which took place at eight, and on
this occasion had consisted of (provided by May) tomato salad with mozzarella
cheese and basil, lentil stew with curried cabbage, and apples (not Cox's
Orange Pippins, which had not yet appeared in the shops). (I.M.)
9. "No real sportsman cares for money," he would say borrowing a
"pony" if it was no use trying for a "monkey". (J.G.)
10. Sir James Foggart! Some gaitered old countryman with little grey
whiskers, neat, weathered and firm-featured; or one of those short necked John
Bulls, still extant, square and weighty, with a flat top to his head, and a flat
white topper on it! (J.G.)
11. The little maid came back. Would he please to go down into the
garden? Old Jolyon marched out through the French window… In descending
the steps he noticed that they wanted painting. (J.G.)
12. "How's the boy?" "A
1,
sir." (J.G.)
13. Members of Parliament and ladies of fashion, like himself and
Fleur… now and then … going for each other like Kilkenny cats. (J.G.)
14. I have translated it here, not in verse… but at least in the King's
English. (R.L.S.)
15. But I am not so timid, and can speak the Queen's English plainly.
(R.L.S.)
16. "Do you remember a play called "The Plain Dealer", by Wycherley,
given at a matinee on January 7
th
last – did you play in that part of Olivia?"
"Yes." "A nice part?" "A very good part." "I said "nice"." "I don't like the
word." "Too suggestive of "prunes and "prisms", Miss Ferrar?'" (J.G.)
17. When she got off her bed to go down to lunch she felt as if only one
thing could do her good, and that was to have Val home. He – her eldest boy –
who was to go to Oxford next month at James' expense, was at Littlehampton
taking his final gallops with his trainer for Smalls as he would have phrased it
following his father's diction. (J.G.)
18. After kissing his mother and pinching Imogen, he ran upstairs three at
a time, and came down four, dressed for dinner. He was awfully sorry but his
"trainer", who had come up too, had asked him to dine at the Oxford and
Cambridge; it wouldn't do to miss – the old chap would be hurt. (J.G.)
19. He went out with his head up and his hat cocked joyously, sniffing the
air of Piccadilly like a young hound loosed into covert… He found his "tutor",
not indeed at the Oxford and Cambridge, but at the Goat's Club. (J.G.)
      65. "You see, he was a Chink – not quite of the best period; but he must              7. The other girls had some trouble finding their true names. Alethea,
have gone West five hundred years ago at least." (J.G.)                              not tolerating "Thea", decided at first for "Alpha", but as this sounded
      66. An evening spent under the calming influence of Winifred Dartie's          presumptions, opted finally for "Aleph", the Hebrew name of the first letter of
common-sense, and Turkish coffee, which, though "liverish stuff", he always          the alphabet. (I.M.)
drank with relish, restored in him something of the feeling that it was a storm in          8. It was evening. They had had supper which took place at eight, and on
a teacup. (J.G.)                                                                     this occasion had consisted of (provided by May) tomato salad with mozzarella
      67. They were going, indeed, at a snail's pace, and through the windows        cheese and basil, lentil stew with curried cabbage, and apples (not Cox's
could see nothing but the faint glow of the street-lamps emerging slowly, high       Orange Pippins, which had not yet appeared in the shops). (I.M.)
up, one by one. (J.G.)                                                                      9. "No real sportsman cares for money," he would say borrowing a
      68. It seemed funny to stand there reading those words among people            "pony" if it was no use trying for a "monkey". (J.G.)
who were reading the same without knowing her from Eve, except, perhaps, by                10. Sir James Foggart! Some gaitered old countryman with little grey
her clothes. (J.G.)                                                                  whiskers, neat, weathered and firm-featured; or one of those short necked John
      69. "You're seeing blue to-night, old thing. It'll all seem different          Bulls, still extant, square and weighty, with a flat top to his head, and a flat
tomorrow." (J.G.)                                                                    white topper on it! (J.G.)
      70. Well, it would be sensible to go and hear things from the horse's                11. The little maid came back. Would he please to go down into the
mouth, as it were. (C.D.)                                                            garden? Old Jolyon marched out through the French window… In descending
                                                                                     the steps he noticed that they wanted painting. (J.G.)
                 Упр. 5. Обратите внимание на реалии                                       12. "How's the boy?" "A1, sir." (J.G.)
                 при переводе следующих предложений                                        13. Members of Parliament and ladies of fashion, like himself and
                                                                                     Fleur… now and then … going for each other like Kilkenny cats. (J.G.)
        1. Once in his rooms, he dropped into a Morris chair and sat staring               14. I have translated it here, not in verse… but at least in the King's
straight before him. (R.A.)                                                          English. (R.L.S.)
        2. Closed in one of her old nightgowns, my Lolita lay on her side with             15. But I am not so timid, and can speak the Queen's English plainly.
her back to me, in the middle of the bed. Her lightly veiled body and bare limbs     (R.L.S.)
formed a Z. She had put both pillows under her dark tousled head … (V.N.)                  16. "Do you remember a play called "The Plain Dealer", by Wycherley,
        3. "…And perhaps your family doctor might like to examine her                given at a matinee on January 7th last – did you play in that part of Olivia?"
physically – just a routine check-up. She is in Mushroom – the last classroom        "Yes." "A nice part?" "A very good part." "I said "nice"." "I don't like the
along that passage." Beardsley School, it may be explained, copied a famous          word." "Too suggestive of "prunes and "prisms", Miss Ferrar?'" (J.G.)
girls' school in England by having "traditional" nicknames for its various                 17. When she got off her bed to go down to lunch she felt as if only one
classrooms: Mushroom, Room – In 8, B – Room, Room – BA and so on.                    thing could do her good, and that was to have Val home. He – her eldest boy –
(V.N.)                                                                               who was to go to Oxford next month at James' expense, was at Littlehampton
        4. Harvey evidently judged to be grown up, proved in fact quite able to      taking his final gallops with his trainer for Smalls as he would have phrased it
look after himself, and at eighteen won a scholarship to study modern                following his father's diction. (J.G.)
languages at University College, London. He had elected to spend a year off                18. After kissing his mother and pinching Imogen, he ran upstairs three at
before taking up his place and had promptly acquired a bursary to spend four         a time, and came down four, dressed for dinner. He was awfully sorry but his
months studying in Italy. (I.M.)                                                     "trainer", who had come up too, had asked him to dine at the Oxford and
        5. Joan, who had just put down her big umbrella, was wearing a smart         Cambridge; it wouldn't do to miss – the old chap would be hurt. (J.G.)
green suit trimmed with narrow bands of grey fur, a black fedora, and high                 19. He went out with his head up and his hat cocked joyously, sniffing the
black boots. (I.M.)                                                                  air of Piccadilly like a young hound loosed into covert… He found his "tutor",
        6. "Is he still teaching?" "Yes, he's still teaching, but he's got some      not indeed at the Oxford and Cambridge, but at the Goat's Club. (J.G.)
sabbatical leave from his college." (I.M.)

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