Лексические, грамматические и стилистические проблемы перевода. Калинкина С.К. - 15 стр.

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68. On the nursery table he found his supper laid out: a glass of milk and
a piece of bread and butter, a sweet biscuit, and a little cold Queen's pudding
without the meringue. (G.G.)
69. She stood very still between the table and the door, thinking very
hard, planning something. "Promise you won't tell. I'll give you that Meccano
set, Master Philip …" (G.G.)
70. He never opened his Meccano set again, never built anything, never
created anything, died, the old dilettante, sixty years later with nothing to show
rather than preserve the memory of Mrs. Baines's malicious voice saying good
night, her soft determined footfalls on the stairs to the basement, going down,
going down. (G.G.)
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1. The blurred moon of a lamp glowed suddenly above Michael's head.
(J.G.)
2. Her beauty in the best Parisian frocks was giving him more satisfac-
tion than if he had collected a perfect bit of china, or a jewel of a picture; he
looked forward to the moment when he would exhibit her in Park Lane. (J.G.)
3. Well, she was getting an old woman. Swithin and he had seen her
crowned – slim slip of a girl, not so old as Imogen. (J.G.)
4. And the the "You be damned" spirit in her blood revolted. The
impudence of it! Shadowing her! No! She was not going to leave Miss Fleur
triumphant. (J.G.)
5. The fellow was sharper than he had thought, and better-looking than he
had hoped. He had a "don't care" appearance that James didn't appreciate. (J.G.)
6. We exchanged horrified glances. (H.L.)
7. While they ate their silent lunch he changed the film in the French
camera. (J.A.)
8. "There you have it," said Sherlock Holmes, knocking out the ashes of
his after-breakfast pipe and slowly refilling it. (A.C.D.)
9. "You were sleeping when I left." "I had a good sleep. Did you walk
far?" (E.H.)
10. I thought of her that first night in the Grand Monde, in her white
dress, moving so exquisitely on her eighteen-year-old feet, and I thought of her
a month ago, bargaining over meat at the butcher’s stores in the Boulevard de
la Somme. (G.G.)
11. Even now, after more than three years have passed and elapsed, I
cannot visualize that young-night street, that already so leafy street, without a
gasp of panic. (V.N.)
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12. (in the drug-store) "First buy me a drink, dad." She watched the listless
pale fountain girl put in the ice, pour in the coke, add the cherry syrup … (V.N.)
13. She was to have an empty London morning. (I.M.)
14. In the meantime he was transferred to the Gunnison jail to save him
from mob violence. (D.H.)
15. Her hair had been a little jaggedly cut shorter, perhaps she had
chopped it about herself with hasty scissors. (I.M.)
16. Then he turned down the lane and stood leaning on the orchard gate –
grey skeleton of a gate. (J.G.)
17. She has a perfect devil of a brother, with whom she was brought up,
who knows her deep dark secret and wants to trade her off to a millionaire who
also has a deep dark secret. (J.G.)
18. Even the staircase was lined with junk, pieces of scrap-iron which
might come in useful one day in this jackdaw's nest of a house. (G.G.)
19. Then (while I stood waiting for her) she pulled out the slow snake of a
brilliant belt and tried it on. (V.N.)
20. Lo recalled that scarecrow of a house, the solitude, the soggy old
pastures, the wind, the bloated wilderness, with an energy of disgust that
distorted her mouth and fattened her half-revealed tongue. (V.N.)
21. Old Jolyon had taken his cigar from under his white moustache
stained by coffee at the edge, and looked at her, that little slip of a thing who
had got such a grip of his heart. (J.G.)
22. He walked into the Green Park that he might cross to Victoria Station
and take the Underground into the City. For so late in January it was warm;
sunlight, through the haze, sparkled on the frosty grass – an illumined cobweb
of a day. (J.G.)
23. Since Mafeking night he had become aware that a "young fool of a
doctor" was hanging round Annette. (J.G.)
24. In those days he felt how insufficient were his memories of Jolly, and
what an amateur of a father he had been. (J.G.)
25. He keeps a your-clothes-are-cleaned-by-electricity-while-you-wait es-
tablishment. (I.M.)
26. Ned explained this to me with his "where-would-he-be-without-me?"
look firmly in place. (J.W.)
27. There is a sort of oh-what-a-wicked-world-this-is-and-how-I-wish-I-
could-do-something-to-make-it-better-and-nobler expression about Montmor-
ency. (J.K.J.)
28. There is a touch of the mythological and the enchanted in those large
stores where according to ads a career girl can get a complete desk-to-date
wardrobe... (V.N.)
29. She sighed, frowned, then clapped her big plump hands together in a let's-
get-down-to-business manner, and again fired her beady eyes upon me. (V.N.)
      68. On the nursery table he found his supper laid out: a glass of milk and           12. (in the drug-store) "First buy me a drink, dad." She watched the listless
a piece of bread and butter, a sweet biscuit, and a little cold Queen's pudding      pale fountain girl put in the ice, pour in the coke, add the cherry syrup … (V.N.)
without the meringue. (G.G.)                                                               13. She was to have an empty London morning. (I.M.)
      69. She stood very still between the table and the door, thinking very               14. In the meantime he was transferred to the Gunnison jail to save him
hard, planning something. "Promise you won't tell. I'll give you that Meccano        from mob violence. (D.H.)
set, Master Philip …" (G.G.)                                                               15. Her hair had been a little jaggedly cut shorter, perhaps she had
      70. He never opened his Meccano set again, never built anything, never         chopped it about herself with hasty scissors. (I.M.)
created anything, died, the old dilettante, sixty years later with nothing to show         16. Then he turned down the lane and stood leaning on the orchard gate –
rather than preserve the memory of Mrs. Baines's malicious voice saying good         grey skeleton of a gate. (J.G.)
night, her soft determined footfalls on the stairs to the basement, going down,            17. She has a perfect devil of a brother, with whom she was brought up,
going down. (G.G.)                                                                   who knows her deep dark secret and wants to trade her off to a millionaire who
                                                                                     also has a deep dark secret. (J.G.)
           Упр. 6. Найдите способы перевода препозитивных                                  18. Even the staircase was lined with junk, pieces of scrap-iron which
                     атрибутивных словосочетаний                                     might come in useful one day in this jackdaw's nest of a house. (G.G.)
                                                                                           19. Then (while I stood waiting for her) she pulled out the slow snake of a
         1. The blurred moon of a lamp glowed suddenly above Michael's head.         brilliant belt and tried it on. (V.N.)
(J.G.)                                                                                     20. Lo recalled that scarecrow of a house, the solitude, the soggy old
        2. Her beauty in the best Parisian frocks was giving him more satisfac-      pastures, the wind, the bloated wilderness, with an energy of disgust that
tion than if he had collected a perfect bit of china, or a jewel of a picture; he    distorted her mouth and fattened her half-revealed tongue. (V.N.)
looked forward to the moment when he would exhibit her in Park Lane. (J.G.)                21. Old Jolyon had taken his cigar from under his white moustache
        3. Well, she was getting an old woman. Swithin and he had seen her           stained by coffee at the edge, and looked at her, that little slip of a thing who
crowned – slim slip of a girl, not so old as Imogen. (J.G.)                          had got such a grip of his heart. (J.G.)
        4. And the the "You be damned" spirit in her blood revolted. The                   22. He walked into the Green Park that he might cross to Victoria Station
impudence of it! Shadowing her! No! She was not going to leave Miss Fleur            and take the Underground into the City. For so late in January it was warm;
triumphant. (J.G.)                                                                   sunlight, through the haze, sparkled on the frosty grass – an illumined cobweb
        5. The fellow was sharper than he had thought, and better-looking than he    of a day. (J.G.)
had hoped. He had a "don't care" appearance that James didn't appreciate. (J.G.)           23. Since Mafeking night he had become aware that a "young fool of a
        6. We exchanged horrified glances. (H.L.)                                    doctor" was hanging round Annette. (J.G.)
        7. While they ate their silent lunch he changed the film in the French             24. In those days he felt how insufficient were his memories of Jolly, and
camera. (J.A.)                                                                       what an amateur of a father he had been. (J.G.)
        8. "There you have it," said Sherlock Holmes, knocking out the ashes of            25. He keeps a your-clothes-are-cleaned-by-electricity-while-you-wait es-
his after-breakfast pipe and slowly refilling it. (A.C.D.)                           tablishment. (I.M.)
        9. "You were sleeping when I left." "I had a good sleep. Did you walk              26. Ned explained this to me with his "where-would-he-be-without-me?"
far?" (E.H.)                                                                         look firmly in place. (J.W.)
      10. I thought of her that first night in the Grand Monde, in her white               27. There is a sort of oh-what-a-wicked-world-this-is-and-how-I-wish-I-
dress, moving so exquisitely on her eighteen-year-old feet, and I thought of her     could-do-something-to-make-it-better-and-nobler expression about Montmor-
a month ago, bargaining over meat at the butcher’s stores in the Boulevard de        ency. (J.K.J.)
la Somme. (G.G.)                                                                           28. There is a touch of the mythological and the enchanted in those large
      11. Even now, after more than three years have passed and elapsed, I           stores where according to ads a career girl can get a complete desk-to-date
cannot visualize that young-night street, that already so leafy street, without a    wardrobe... (V.N.)
gasp of panic. (V.N.)                                                                      29. She sighed, frowned, then clapped her big plump hands together in a let's-
                                                                                     get-down-to-business manner, and again fired her beady eyes upon me. (V.N.)
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