Лексические, грамматические и стилистические проблемы перевода. Калинкина С.К. - 27 стр.

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Упр. 11. Обратите особое внимание на передачу фонетических
и графических стилистических средств
1. The possessive instinct never stands still. Through florescence and
feud, frosts and fires, it followed the laws of progression even in the Forsyte
family which had believed it fixed for ever. (J.G.)
2. His father was sitting before the dressing table sideways to the mirror,
while Emily slowly passed two silver-backed brushes through and through his
hair … "Your father's been in a great state all the evening. I'm sure I don't know
what about." The faint "whish-whish" of the brushes continued the soothing of
her voice. (J.G.)
3. The click of the bedroom door, the rasp of a match, the pad of feet in
the corridor – many nights they had quietly woken me, and I did not get to
sleep again until she was back. (V.N.)
4. Crash-crash. Crash. Crash. The black smoke drifted away, leaving a
foul acrid stench of high explosive. (R.A.)
5. His runner shouted: "Look out, sir! Here comes a Minnie!" Rrrrumph!
A devastating crash, a black sporting of debris, a whistle of falling fragments.
(R.A.)
6. She tossed the apple up into the sundusted air, and caught it – it made
a cupped polished plop. (V.N.)
7. We began to throw and it seemed impossible to me that I could ever
have a life again; away from the rue Gambetta and the rue Catinat, the flat taste
of Vermouth cassis, the homely click of dice, and the gunfire traveling like a
clock-hand around the horizon. (G.G.)
8. … he heard her laugh, then Soames saying, "You are a traitress; be so
kind as to withdraw." … Marjorie Ferrar walked on towards the door, and the soft
man followed her … Soames, like a slow dog making sure, walked after them;
Michael walked after him. The words "How amusing!" floated back, and a soft
voice echoing snigger. Slam! Both outer door and incident were closed. (J.G.)
9. … a cynical-looking cat had fallen asleep on the dining-table. Old
Jolyon "shoo'd" her off at once … "She's got fleas," he said, following her out
of the room. Through the door in the hall leading to the basement he called
"Hssst!" several times, as though assisting the cat's departure. (J.G.)
10. Some birds were singing. Distant rooks cawed sadly. (I.M.)
11. The rain rattled on the car. (I.M.)
12. Bumping on cobbles the car hummed and drummed. (I.M.)
13. "Did you have a marvelous time at the camp?" "Uh-huh." "Sorry to
leave?" "Un-un". "Talk, Lo – don't grunt." (V.N.)
14. "We are not so much concerned, Mr. Humbird, with having our
students become bookworms or be able to reel off all the capitals of Europe
which nobody knows anyway, or learn by heart the dates of forgotten battles.
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What we are concerned with is the adjustment of the child to group life. This is
why we stress the four D's: Dramatics, Dance, Debating and Dating. (V.N.)
15. "Look," she said as she rode the bike beside me, one foot scraping the
darkly glistening sidewalk, "look, I've decided something. I want to leave
school. I hate that school … Find another. Leave at once. Go for a long trip
again. But this time we'll go wherever I want, won't we?" …"Okay … Now
hop-hop-hop, Lenore, or you'll just get soaked." (V.N.)
16. All of a sudden, as if the car I drove responded to my poor heart's
pangs, we were slithering from side to side, with something making a helpless
plap-plap-plap under us. "You got a flat, mister," said cheerful Lo. (V.N.)
17. I got out of the car and slammed the door. How matter-of-fact, how
square that slam sounded in the void of the sunless day! Woof, commented the
dog perfunctorily. I pressed the bell button, it vibrated through my whole
system. Woof, said the dog. A rush and a shuffle, and woof-woof went the
door. (V.N.)
18. "We-e-ell!" she exhaled after a pause with all the emphasis of wonder
and welcome. (V.N.)
19. And when my poor mother saw me cry, she would take me in her
arms and say, "Don't hate him, Gull, or it will poison your life. You don't want
that man to spoil your life." "No, mums," I would say, "I'd rather die." "So you
won't hate him, my darling, you'll put all that bad feeling out of your heart."
"Yes, mums, boo-hoo, to-morrow," "No, to-day, this minute." (J.C.)
20. "A fellow who'd worked for him accused him of stealing some kind of
idea or invention from him …" Nora stopped drinking to ask: "Did Wynant
really steal it?" "Tch, tch, tch," I said. "This is Christmas Eve: try to think good
of your fellow-man." (D.H.)
21. "Forsyte? Why – that's my name too. Perhaps we're cousins …"
"Didn't you hear, Father? Isn't it queer – our name's the same. Are we cousins?"
"What's that?" he said. "Forsyte? Distant, perhaps." "My name is Jolyon, sir.
Jon, for short." "Oh! Ah!" said Soames. "Yes. Distant. How are you?" (J.G.)
22. Nothing befalls the author that he cannot transmute into a stanza, a
song, or a story. (W.S.M.)
23. "WILL YOU BE QUIET!" he bawled. (A.S.)
24. "Did you see him today to that Carter woman, Lady Carter? Puh!"
There was such vindictiveness in that "puh" that George was disconcerted. (R.A.)
25. "Er – um – P'raps I'd better 'splain that I gave him that picture." Said
Taffy, but she did not feel quite comfy. "You!" said the Tribe of Tegumai all to-
gether. "Small-person-with-no-manner-who-ought-to-be spanked! You?" (R.K.)
26. His name was Tegumai Bopsulai, and that means, "Man-who-does-
not-put-his-foot-forward-in-a-hurry."; but we … will call him Tegumai, for
short. And his wife's name was Teshumai Tewindrow, and that means, "Lady-
  Упр. 11. Обратите особое внимание на передачу фонетических                         What we are concerned with is the adjustment of the child to group life. This is
             и графических стилистических средств                                    why we stress the four D's: Dramatics, Dance, Debating and Dating. (V.N.)
                                                                                           15. "Look," she said as she rode the bike beside me, one foot scraping the
       1. The possessive instinct never stands still. Through florescence and        darkly glistening sidewalk, "look, I've decided something. I want to leave
feud, frosts and fires, it followed the laws of progression even in the Forsyte      school. I hate that school … Find another. Leave at once. Go for a long trip
family which had believed it fixed for ever. (J.G.)                                  again. But this time we'll go wherever I want, won't we?" …"Okay … Now
       2. His father was sitting before the dressing table sideways to the mirror,   hop-hop-hop, Lenore, or you'll just get soaked." (V.N.)
while Emily slowly passed two silver-backed brushes through and through his                16. All of a sudden, as if the car I drove responded to my poor heart's
hair … "Your father's been in a great state all the evening. I'm sure I don't know   pangs, we were slithering from side to side, with something making a helpless
what about." The faint "whish-whish" of the brushes continued the soothing of        plap-plap-plap under us. "You got a flat, mister," said cheerful Lo. (V.N.)
her voice. (J.G.)                                                                          17. I got out of the car and slammed the door. How matter-of-fact, how
       3. The click of the bedroom door, the rasp of a match, the pad of feet in     square that slam sounded in the void of the sunless day! Woof, commented the
the corridor – many nights they had quietly woken me, and I did not get to           dog perfunctorily. I pressed the bell button, it vibrated through my whole
sleep again until she was back. (V.N.)                                               system. Woof, said the dog. A rush and a shuffle, and woof-woof went the
       4. Crash-crash. Crash. Crash. The black smoke drifted away, leaving a         door. (V.N.)
foul acrid stench of high explosive. (R.A.)                                                18. "We-e-ell!" she exhaled after a pause with all the emphasis of wonder
       5. His runner shouted: "Look out, sir! Here comes a Minnie!" Rrrrumph!        and welcome. (V.N.)
A devastating crash, a black sporting of debris, a whistle of falling fragments.           19. And when my poor mother saw me cry, she would take me in her
(R.A.)                                                                               arms and say, "Don't hate him, Gull, or it will poison your life. You don't want
       6. She tossed the apple up into the sundusted air, and caught it – it made    that man to spoil your life." "No, mums," I would say, "I'd rather die." "So you
a cupped polished plop. (V.N.)                                                       won't hate him, my darling, you'll put all that bad feeling out of your heart."
       7. We began to throw and it seemed impossible to me that I could ever         "Yes, mums, boo-hoo, to-morrow," "No, to-day, this minute." (J.C.)
have a life again; away from the rue Gambetta and the rue Catinat, the flat taste          20. "A fellow who'd worked for him accused him of stealing some kind of
of Vermouth cassis, the homely click of dice, and the gunfire traveling like a       idea or invention from him …" Nora stopped drinking to ask: "Did Wynant
clock-hand around the horizon. (G.G.)                                                really steal it?" "Tch, tch, tch," I said. "This is Christmas Eve: try to think good
       8. … he heard her laugh, then Soames saying, "You are a traitress; be so      of your fellow-man." (D.H.)
kind as to withdraw." … Marjorie Ferrar walked on towards the door, and the soft           21. "Forsyte? Why – that's my name too. Perhaps we're cousins …"
man followed her … Soames, like a slow dog making sure, walked after them;           "Didn't you hear, Father? Isn't it queer – our name's the same. Are we cousins?"
Michael walked after him. The words "How amusing!" floated back, and a soft          "What's that?" he said. "Forsyte? Distant, perhaps." "My name is Jolyon, sir.
voice echoing snigger. Slam! Both outer door and incident were closed. (J.G.)        Jon, for short." "Oh! Ah!" said Soames. "Yes. Distant. How are you?" (J.G.)
       9. … a cynical-looking cat had fallen asleep on the dining-table. Old               22. Nothing befalls the author that he cannot transmute into a stanza, a
Jolyon "shoo'd" her off at once … "She's got fleas," he said, following her out      song, or a story. (W.S.M.)
of the room. Through the door in the hall leading to the basement he called                23. "WILL YOU BE QUIET!" he bawled. (A.S.)
"Hssst!" several times, as though assisting the cat's departure. (J.G.)                    24. "Did you see him today to that Carter woman, Lady Carter? Puh!"
      10. Some birds were singing. Distant rooks cawed sadly. (I.M.)                 There was such vindictiveness in that "puh" that George was disconcerted. (R.A.)
      11. The rain rattled on the car. (I.M.)                                              25. "Er – um – P'raps I'd better 'splain that I gave him that picture." Said
      12. Bumping on cobbles the car hummed and drummed. (I.M.)                      Taffy, but she did not feel quite comfy. "You!" said the Tribe of Tegumai all to-
      13. "Did you have a marvelous time at the camp?" "Uh-huh." "Sorry to           gether. "Small-person-with-no-manner-who-ought-to-be spanked! You?" (R.K.)
leave?" "Un-un". "Talk, Lo – don't grunt." (V.N.)                                          26. His name was Tegumai Bopsulai, and that means, "Man-who-does-
      14. "We are not so much concerned, Mr. Humbird, with having our                not-put-his-foot-forward-in-a-hurry."; but we … will call him Tegumai, for
students become bookworms or be able to reel off all the capitals of Europe          short. And his wife's name was Teshumai Tewindrow, and that means, "Lady-
which nobody knows anyway, or learn by heart the dates of forgotten battles.
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