Лексические, грамматические и стилистические проблемы перевода. Калинкина С.К. - 24 стр.

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Упр. 10. Передайте лексические и синтаксические стилистические
приемы, использованные в следующих предложениях
1. Soames smiled and said: "Yes. Good-bye. Remember me to Uncle
Timothy!" And, leaving a cold kiss on each forehead, whose wrinkles seemed
to try and cling to his lips as if longing to be kissed away, he left them looking
brightly after him … (J.G.)
2. "What's this about Dartie?" he said, and his eyes glared at her. Emily's
self-possession never deserted her. "What have you been hearing?" she asked
blandly. "What's this about Dartie?" repeated James, "He's gone bankrupt."
"Fiddle!" James made a great effort, and rose to the full height of his stork-like
figure. "You never tell me anything," he said, "he's gone bankrupt." The
destruction of that fixed idea seemed to Emily all that mattered at the moment.
"He has not," she answered firmly. "He's gone to Buenos Aires." (J.G.)
3. With another five pounds in his hand, and a little warmth in his heart,
for he was fond of his grandmother, he went out into Park Lane. (J.G.)
4. "Oh! Tell us about her, Auntie," cried Imogen; "I can just remember
her. She's the skeleton in the family cupboard, isn't she? And they are such
fun." Aunt Hester sat down. Really, Juley had done it now! "She wasn't much
of a skeleton as I remember her," murmured Euphemia, "extremely well cov-
ered." (J.G.)
5. That evening, while they were waiting for dinner, she murmured: "I've
told Smither to get up half a bottle of the sweet champagne, Hester. I think we
ought to drink dear James' health, and – and the health of Soames' wife, only let's
keep that secret … it might upset Timothy." "It's more likely to upset us," said
Aunt Hester. "But we must, I suppose, for such an occasion." (J.G.)
6. "What the devil do you mean by this, Mr. Holmes? Do you dismiss
my case?" "Well, Mr. Gibson, at least I dismiss you. I should have thought my
words were plain." (A.C.D.)
7. He was planned by nature to be a butt. He looked like a distended hot-
water bottle; he was magnificently imbecile; he believed everything, and
anxiously he forgave the men who got through the vacant hours by playing
jokes upon him. (S.L.)
8. Dinner began with soup and Soames deprecating his own cows for not
being Herefords. (J.G.)
9. An evening spent under the calming influence of Winifred Dartie's
common sense, and Turkish coffee, which, though "liverish stuff", he always
drank with relish, restored in him something of the feeling that it was a storm in
a teacup. (J.G.)
10. "You don't want it to come into Court?" "No; though I suppose it
might be rather fun." Mr. Settlewhite smiled again. "That entirely depends on
how many skeletons you have in your cupboard." Marjorie Ferrar also smiled.
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"I shall put everything in your hands,” she said. "Not the skeletons, my dear
young lady." (J.G.)
11. "Who are you from?" "Messrs. Settlewhite and Stark – a suit."
"Dressmakers?" The young man smiled. "Come in," said Michael. "I'll see if
she is at home." Fleur was in the "parlour". "A young man from some
dressmakers for you, dear." "Mrs. Michael Mont? In the suit of Ferrar against
Mont – libel. Good day, Madam." (J.G.)
12. When in the new Parliament Michael rose to deliver his maiden effort
towards the close of the debate on the King's Speech, he had some notes in his
hand and not an idea in his head. (J.G.)
13. Never again would he sleep in his dining-room and wake with the
light filtering through those curtains bought by Winifred at Knickers and
Jarveys with the money of James. (J.G.)
14. Thus had passed Montague Dartie in the forty-fifth year of his age
from the house which he had called his own … (J.G.)
15. How nice and slim he looked in his white waistcoat, and his dark
thick lashes. (J.G.)
16. Jolly was then at Harrow, Holly still learning from Mademoiselle
Beauce. There had been nothing to keep Jolyon at home, and he had removed
his grief and his paint box abroad. (J.G.)
17. "Dad, is it time that I absolutely can't get at any of my money?" "Only
the income, fortunately, my love." "How perfectly beastly!" (J.G.)
18. It was too insulting to him. He slept over that project and his wounded
pride – or rather, kept vigil. (J.G.)
19. They went, eyeing each other askance, unsteady, and unflinching;
they climbed the garden railings. The spikes on the top slightly ripped Val's
sleeve, and occupied his mind. (J.G.)
20. With that kiss, soft and hot, between his eyes, and those words, "I
hope they won't worry you much," in his ears, he sat down to a cigarette, before
a dying fire. (J.G.)
21. And with a prolonged sound not quite a sniff and not quite a snort, he
trod on Euphemia's toe, and went out, leaving a sensation and a faint scent of
barley-sugar behind him. (J.G.)
22. … he put his ear to the ground …but he could hear nothing – only the
concertina! And almost instantly he did hear a grinding sound, a faint toot. Yes!
It was a car – coming – coming! Up he jumped. Should he wait in the porch, or
rush upstairs … (J.G.)
23. They had marched more than thirty kilometers since dawn, along the
white, hot road where occasional thickets of trees threw a moment of shade …
(D.H.L.)
Упр. 10. Передайте лексические и синтаксические стилистические                        "I shall put everything in your hands,” she said. "Not the skeletons, my dear
      приемы, использованные в следующих предложениях                                 young lady." (J.G.)
                                                                                            11. "Who are you from?" "Messrs. Settlewhite and Stark – a suit."
        1. Soames smiled and said: "Yes. Good-bye. Remember me to Uncle               "Dressmakers?" The young man smiled. "Come in," said Michael. "I'll see if
Timothy!" And, leaving a cold kiss on each forehead, whose wrinkles seemed            she is at home." Fleur was in the "parlour". "A young man from some
to try and cling to his lips as if longing to be kissed away, he left them looking    dressmakers for you, dear." "Mrs. Michael Mont? In the suit of Ferrar against
brightly after him … (J.G.)                                                           Mont – libel. Good day, Madam." (J.G.)
        2. "What's this about Dartie?" he said, and his eyes glared at her. Emily's         12. When in the new Parliament Michael rose to deliver his maiden effort
self-possession never deserted her. "What have you been hearing?" she asked           towards the close of the debate on the King's Speech, he had some notes in his
blandly. "What's this about Dartie?" repeated James, "He's gone bankrupt."            hand and not an idea in his head. (J.G.)
"Fiddle!" James made a great effort, and rose to the full height of his stork-like          13. Never again would he sleep in his dining-room and wake with the
figure. "You never tell me anything," he said, "he's gone bankrupt." The              light filtering through those curtains bought by Winifred at Knickers and
destruction of that fixed idea seemed to Emily all that mattered at the moment.       Jarveys with the money of James. (J.G.)
"He has not," she answered firmly. "He's gone to Buenos Aires." (J.G.)                      14. Thus had passed Montague Dartie in the forty-fifth year of his age
        3. With another five pounds in his hand, and a little warmth in his heart,    from the house which he had called his own … (J.G.)
for he was fond of his grandmother, he went out into Park Lane. (J.G.)                      15. How nice and slim he looked in his white waistcoat, and his dark
        4. "Oh! Tell us about her, Auntie," cried Imogen; "I can just remember        thick lashes. (J.G.)
her. She's the skeleton in the family cupboard, isn't she? And they are such                16. Jolly was then at Harrow, Holly still learning from Mademoiselle
fun." Aunt Hester sat down. Really, Juley had done it now! "She wasn't much           Beauce. There had been nothing to keep Jolyon at home, and he had removed
of a skeleton as I remember her," murmured Euphemia, "extremely well cov-             his grief and his paint box abroad. (J.G.)
ered." (J.G.)                                                                               17. "Dad, is it time that I absolutely can't get at any of my money?" "Only
        5. That evening, while they were waiting for dinner, she murmured: "I've      the income, fortunately, my love." "How perfectly beastly!" (J.G.)
told Smither to get up half a bottle of the sweet champagne, Hester. I think we             18. It was too insulting to him. He slept over that project and his wounded
ought to drink dear James' health, and – and the health of Soames' wife, only let's   pride – or rather, kept vigil. (J.G.)
keep that secret … it might upset Timothy." "It's more likely to upset us," said            19. They went, eyeing each other askance, unsteady, and unflinching;
Aunt Hester. "But we must, I suppose, for such an occasion." (J.G.)                   they climbed the garden railings. The spikes on the top slightly ripped Val's
        6. "What the devil do you mean by this, Mr. Holmes? Do you dismiss            sleeve, and occupied his mind. (J.G.)
my case?" "Well, Mr. Gibson, at least I dismiss you. I should have thought my               20. With that kiss, soft and hot, between his eyes, and those words, "I
words were plain." (A.C.D.)                                                           hope they won't worry you much," in his ears, he sat down to a cigarette, before
        7. He was planned by nature to be a butt. He looked like a distended hot-     a dying fire. (J.G.)
water bottle; he was magnificently imbecile; he believed everything, and                    21. And with a prolonged sound not quite a sniff and not quite a snort, he
anxiously he forgave the men who got through the vacant hours by playing              trod on Euphemia's toe, and went out, leaving a sensation and a faint scent of
jokes upon him. (S.L.)                                                                barley-sugar behind him. (J.G.)
        8. Dinner began with soup and Soames deprecating his own cows for not               22. … he put his ear to the ground …but he could hear nothing – only the
being Herefords. (J.G.)                                                               concertina! And almost instantly he did hear a grinding sound, a faint toot. Yes!
        9. An evening spent under the calming influence of Winifred Dartie's          It was a car – coming – coming! Up he jumped. Should he wait in the porch, or
common sense, and Turkish coffee, which, though "liverish stuff", he always           rush upstairs … (J.G.)
drank with relish, restored in him something of the feeling that it was a storm in          23. They had marched more than thirty kilometers since dawn, along the
a teacup. (J.G.)                                                                      white, hot road where occasional thickets of trees threw a moment of shade …
      10. "You don't want it to come into Court?" "No; though I suppose it            (D.H.L.)
might be rather fun." Mr. Settlewhite smiled again. "That entirely depends on
how many skeletons you have in your cupboard." Marjorie Ferrar also smiled.
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