Лексические, грамматические и стилистические проблемы перевода. Калинкина С.К. - 23 стр.

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sympathetically. It can't be done. One must just blunder on. Truth lies in blun-
dering on." (I.M.)
44. As I stood inside in the semi-darkness I had a rapid debate as to
whether I wouldn't go back and tell Hugo that the door had been locked. It
might have been locked. It might easily have been locked. I struggled with this
idea, not certain whether or not I ought to regard it as a temptation. (I.M.)
45. "And how's your head now?" I asked Hugo. We must have been doing
a good twenty miles per hour. (I.M.)
46. And, motionless, old Jolyon stared at the wall, but for his open eyes,
he might have been asleep. (J.G.)
47. That tree had been, perhaps, all real English history; it dated, he shou-
ldn't wonder, from the days of Elizabeth at least. His own fifty years were as
nothing to its wood. When the house behind it, which he now owned, was three
hundred years of age instead of twelve, that tree might still be standing there, vast
and hollow – for who would commit such sacrilege as to cut it down? A Forsyte
might perhaps still be living in that house, to guard it jealously. (J.G.)
48. Light was coming through in the corner flat, and he could hear a piano
being played. (J.G.)
49. Soames must have been pressing her to go back to him again, with
public opinion and the Law on his side too! (J.G.)
50. "I dare say it'll be best for her to go abroad." Yet the thought dis-
pleased him. Why should Soames hunt her out of England? Besides, he might
follow, and out there she would still be more helpless against the attentions of
her own husband! (J.G.)
51. "Can you really want to live all your days half-dead in this little hole?
Come back to me, and I'll give you all you want. You shall live your own life; I
swear it." (J.G.)
52. …and for all sign of change old Jolyon might have been sitting there
still, with legs crossed, in the arm-chair, and domed forehead and deep eyes
grave above the Times … (J.G.)
53. Dartie's eyes were moving from side to side. "Does she know about
me?" he said… "No. Val knows. The others don't; they only know you went
away." She heard him sigh with relief. "But they shall know," she said firmly,
«if you give me cause." (J.G.)
54. He shouldn't wonder if Irene quite enjoyed this foreign life; she had
never been properly English – even to look at! (J.G.)
55. He could see, then, that she was struggling to preserve her composure.
(J.G.)
56. "I want to tell you something, Dad. It was through me that Jolly
enlisted and went out." … Surely Holly might have told him all this before! But
he smothered the sarcastic sayings on his lips. (J.G.)
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57. He made a little half airy movement with his hand, as who should say:
"Such things – such things will happen to us!" (J.G.)
58. The maid who came handed him a telegram. Watching her take Irene
away, he thought: "This must have come an hour or more ago, and she didn't
bring it out to us!" (J.G.)
59. Soames nodded at the shrewdness, the clear hard judgment in his
young wife, but it disquieted him a little. The thought may have just flashed
through him, too. "When I'm eighty she'll be fifty-tive, having trouble with
me!" (J.G.)
60. "I was sorry for Jolyon losing his boy. It might have been Val." (J.G.)
61. "I won't go in," said Soames with relief. "My father's dying; I have to
go up. Is it all right?" The doctor's face expressed a kind of doubting admira-
tion. If they were all as unemotional, he might have been saying. (J.G.)
62. He heard the nurse quietly crying over there by the fire; curious that
she, a stranger, should be the only one of them who cried!
63. "Personality is a mixture of genes. You can't do anything about it.
You can't put there what there isn't a place for, you can't take anything away
without leaving a bad trace. She would have to want to change." (M.S.)
64. "I am not convinced about that. In fact, I haven’t thought on those
lines," said Tom. "Should I?" (M.S.)
65. "Are we born with memories?" Dave said. "There is a theory of that
nature. It well might be." (M.S.)
66. One pictured him at home, drinking tea, surrounded by a numerous
family. It was in that tone that he must have spoken to his children when they
were tiresome. (A.H.)
67. I came to typhoid fever – read the symptoms – discovered that I had
typhoid fever, mush have had it for months without knowing it – wondered
what else I had got … (J.K.J.)
68. Bright’s disease, I was relieved to find, I had only in a modified form,
and, so far as that was concerned, I might live for years. Cholera I had, with
severe complications; and diphtheria I seemed to have been born with. (J.K.J.)
69. I tried to feel my heart. I could not feel my heart. It had stopped beating.
I have since been induced to come to the opinion that it must have been there all
the time, and must have been beating, I cannot account for it. (J.K.J.)
70. I must have been very weak at the time, because I know, after the first
half-hour or so, I seemed to take no interest whatever in my food – an unusual
thing for me – and I did not want my cheese. (J.K.J.)
sympathetically. It can't be done. One must just blunder on. Truth lies in blun-              57. He made a little half airy movement with his hand, as who should say:
dering on." (I.M.)                                                                      "Such things – such things will happen to us!" (J.G.)
       44. As I stood inside in the semi-darkness I had a rapid debate as to                  58. The maid who came handed him a telegram. Watching her take Irene
whether I wouldn't go back and tell Hugo that the door had been locked. It              away, he thought: "This must have come an hour or more ago, and she didn't
might have been locked. It might easily have been locked. I struggled with this         bring it out to us!" (J.G.)
idea, not certain whether or not I ought to regard it as a temptation. (I.M.)                 59. Soames nodded at the shrewdness, the clear hard judgment in his
       45. "And how's your head now?" I asked Hugo. We must have been doing             young wife, but it disquieted him a little. The thought may have just flashed
a good twenty miles per hour. (I.M.)                                                    through him, too. "When I'm eighty she'll be fifty-tive, having trouble with
       46. And, motionless, old Jolyon stared at the wall, but for his open eyes,       me!" (J.G.)
he might have been asleep. (J.G.)                                                             60. "I was sorry for Jolyon losing his boy. It might have been Val." (J.G.)
       47. That tree had been, perhaps, all real English history; it dated, he shou-          61. "I won't go in," said Soames with relief. "My father's dying; I have to
ldn't wonder, from the days of Elizabeth at least. His own fifty years were as          go up. Is it all right?" The doctor's face expressed a kind of doubting admira-
nothing to its wood. When the house behind it, which he now owned, was three            tion. If they were all as unemotional, he might have been saying. (J.G.)
hundred years of age instead of twelve, that tree might still be standing there, vast         62. He heard the nurse quietly crying over there by the fire; curious that
and hollow – for who would commit such sacrilege as to cut it down? A Forsyte           she, a stranger, should be the only one of them who cried!
might perhaps still be living in that house, to guard it jealously. (J.G.)                    63. "Personality is a mixture of genes. You can't do anything about it.
       48. Light was coming through in the corner flat, and he could hear a piano       You can't put there what there isn't a place for, you can't take anything away
being played. (J.G.)                                                                    without leaving a bad trace. She would have to want to change." (M.S.)
       49. Soames must have been pressing her to go back to him again, with                   64. "I am not convinced about that. In fact, I haven’t thought on those
public opinion and the Law on his side too! (J.G.)                                      lines," said Tom. "Should I?" (M.S.)
       50. "I dare say it'll be best for her to go abroad." Yet the thought dis-              65. "Are we born with memories?" Dave said. "There is a theory of that
pleased him. Why should Soames hunt her out of England? Besides, he might               nature. It well might be." (M.S.)
follow, and out there she would still be more helpless against the attentions of              66. One pictured him at home, drinking tea, surrounded by a numerous
her own husband! (J.G.)                                                                 family. It was in that tone that he must have spoken to his children when they
       51. "Can you really want to live all your days half-dead in this little hole?    were tiresome. (A.H.)
Come back to me, and I'll give you all you want. You shall live your own life; I              67. I came to typhoid fever – read the symptoms – discovered that I had
swear it." (J.G.)                                                                       typhoid fever, mush have had it for months without knowing it – wondered
       52. …and for all sign of change old Jolyon might have been sitting there         what else I had got … (J.K.J.)
still, with legs crossed, in the arm-chair, and domed forehead and deep eyes                  68. Bright’s disease, I was relieved to find, I had only in a modified form,
grave above the Times … (J.G.)                                                          and, so far as that was concerned, I might live for years. Cholera I had, with
       53. Dartie's eyes were moving from side to side. "Does she know about            severe complications; and diphtheria I seemed to have been born with. (J.K.J.)
me?" he said… "No. Val knows. The others don't; they only know you went                       69. I tried to feel my heart. I could not feel my heart. It had stopped beating.
away." She heard him sigh with relief. "But they shall know," she said firmly,          I have since been induced to come to the opinion that it must have been there all
«if you give me cause." (J.G.)                                                          the time, and must have been beating, I cannot account for it. (J.K.J.)
       54. He shouldn't wonder if Irene quite enjoyed this foreign life; she had              70. I must have been very weak at the time, because I know, after the first
never been properly English – even to look at! (J.G.)                                   half-hour or so, I seemed to take no interest whatever in my food – an unusual
       55. He could see, then, that she was struggling to preserve her composure.       thing for me – and I did not want my cheese. (J.K.J.)
(J.G.)
       56. "I want to tell you something, Dad. It was through me that Jolly
enlisted and went out." … Surely Holly might have told him all this before! But
he smothered the sarcastic sayings on his lips. (J.G.)

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