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14. A problem without a solution may interest the student, but can hardly
fail to annoy the casual reader. (A.C.D.)
15. I happened to know he was a student
of Wordsworth and wrote nature
poems. (G.G.)
16. The orderly was a youth of about twenty-two, of medium height, and
well built. He had strong, heavy limbs, was swarthy, with a soft black, young
moustache. (D.H.L.)
17. Rosemary lit a fresh
cigarette. (K.M.)
18. "You have a case, Holmes?" I remarked. "The faculty
of deduction is
certainly contagious, Watson," he answered. "It has enabled you to prove my
secret. Yes, I have a case." (A.C.D.)
19. "I didn't know," said Father Brown smiling, "that you were a patron
of
the New Art." "I didn't know that you were," retorted the other. "I came here to
catch a man." "I hope you will have good sport
." (G.K.Ch.)
20. Trying to discover who they were, he tripped over his long brown
habit
as he passed, and the low bee-like voice of the young actress called out
after him: "I say, Brother Bono, don't be in a hurry." (H.E.B.)
21. He bathed, telephoned for his breakfast, and his favourite barber,
dressed in a symphony
of purple and gray, and set out for Broadway. (R.L.)
22. "I would like to use my remaining time with you to remind you that this
case is not a difficult one, it requires no minute
sifting of complicated facts." (H.L.)
23. Gordon rose and, picking up one of the shirts, gave it a minute
examination. (F.S.F.)
24. Nick's father ordered some water to be put on the stove, and while it
was heating he spoke to Nick. "This lady
is going to have a baby, Nick," he
said. "I know", said Nick. (E.H.)
25. Judge Taylor nodded, and then Atticus did something I never saw him
do before or since, in public or in private: he unbuttoned his vest, unbuttoned
his collar, loosened his tie, and took off his coat
. (H.L.)
26. In New York I eagerly accepted the soft
job fate offered me: it
consisted mainly of thinking up and editing perfume ads. (V.N.)
27. "I'm afraid something's happened, sir. The German's gone. Sir."
"Gone?" "Hanged himself." "Good God! Hanged! But why?" "He's been very
funny
these last three days." (J.G.)
28. As James had phrased it, "There it was!" No use to fuss! Nothing to
be had out of admitting that it had been a "nasty jar" – in the phraseology
of the
day. (J.G.)
29. As he vanished into the bathroom his visitor's dark eyes roved nerv-
ously around the room, resting for a moment on a great English travelling bag
in the corner and on a family
of thick silk shirts littered on the chairs amid im-
pressive neckties and soft woolen socks. (F.S.F.)
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30. As he pulled up, another car came up to a gliding stop alongside, and
a very striking looking, athletically lean young woman (where had I seen her?)
with a high complexion and shoulder length brilliant bronze hair, greeted Lo
with a ringing "Hi!" – and then, addressing me, effusively, elusively (placed
!),
stressing certain words, said: "What a shame it was to tear Dolly away from the
play …" (V.N.)
31. To my surprise I found her dressed. She was sitting on the edge of the
bed in slacks and T-shirt, and was looking at me as if she could not quite place
me. (V.N.)
32. The uneasiness of the Forsyte family has been justified by the simple
mention of the hat … The author
of the uneasiness stood talking to June by the
farther door … (J.G.)
33. He was seldom, indeed, far from Irene's side at public functions
and he could be seen following her about with his eyes. (J.G.)
34. She thought of June's father, young Jolyon, who had run away with
that foreign girl. Ah! What a sad blow to his father and to them all … A little
water stood
in her eyes. (J.G.)
35. He spoke with relish, as though he felt that he was cheering up his old
aunt … "You're so clever with all those things," said Aunt Ann. "And how's
dear Irene?" Soames' smile died.
(J.G.)
36. Difficult to believe it was so long ago, he felt young still! … With his
white head and his loneliness he had remained young and green
at heart. (J.G.)
37. He returned to teach in London, then went back to America, thereafter
making regular, sometimes prolonged, visits to the English philosophical scene.
As he retained a tender relation with his parents, his face was occasionally,
until his mother's death, to be seen in Ennistone, and his fame was kept green
among us. (I.M.)
38. There was June, the atom
with flaming hair, who had climbed all over
him, twined and twisted herself about him – about his heart that was made to be
the plaything and beloved resort of tiny helpless things. (J.G.)
39. When in the first week of December he decided to go to Paris, he was
far from admitting that Irene's presence was influencing him. He had not been
there two days before he owned
that the wish to see her had been more than
half the reason. (J.G.)
40. She owned
that to be alone in Paris was a little difficult, and yet, Paris
was so full of its own life, it was often, she confessed, as innocuous as a desert.
(J.G.)
41. "We'll meet at the Main Recruiting Office, then," said Jolly, "at
twelve o'clock." And, opening the window
, he went out on to the terrace,
conforming to the creed which had made him retire when he surprised
them in
the hall. (J.G.)
       14. A problem without a solution may interest the student, but can hardly                 30. As he pulled up, another car came up to a gliding stop alongside, and
fail to annoy the casual reader. (A.C.D.)                                                  a very striking looking, athletically lean young woman (where had I seen her?)
       15. I happened to know he was a student of Wordsworth and wrote nature              with a high complexion and shoulder length brilliant bronze hair, greeted Lo
poems. (G.G.)                                                                              with a ringing "Hi!" – and then, addressing me, effusively, elusively (placed!),
       16. The orderly was a youth of about twenty-two, of medium height, and              stressing certain words, said: "What a shame it was to tear Dolly away from the
well built. He had strong, heavy limbs, was swarthy, with a soft black, young              play …" (V.N.)
moustache. (D.H.L.)                                                                              31. To my surprise I found her dressed. She was sitting on the edge of the
       17. Rosemary lit a fresh cigarette. (K.M.)                                          bed in slacks and T-shirt, and was looking at me as if she could not quite place
       18. "You have a case, Holmes?" I remarked. "The faculty of deduction is             me. (V.N.)
certainly contagious, Watson," he answered. "It has enabled you to prove my                      32. The uneasiness of the Forsyte family has been justified by the simple
secret. Yes, I have a case." (A.C.D.)                                                      mention of the hat … The author of the uneasiness stood talking to June by the
       19. "I didn't know," said Father Brown smiling, "that you were a patron of          farther door … (J.G.)
the New Art." "I didn't know that you were," retorted the other. "I came here to                 33. He was seldom, indeed, far from Irene's side at public functions …
catch a man." "I hope you will have good sport." (G.K.Ch.)                                 and he could be seen following her about with his eyes. (J.G.)
       20. Trying to discover who they were, he tripped over his long brown                      34. She thought of June's father, young Jolyon, who had run away with
habit as he passed, and the low bee-like voice of the young actress called out             that foreign girl. Ah! What a sad blow to his father and to them all … A little
after him: "I say, Brother Bono, don't be in a hurry." (H.E.B.)                            water stood in her eyes. (J.G.)
       21. He bathed, telephoned for his breakfast, and his favourite barber,                    35. He spoke with relish, as though he felt that he was cheering up his old
dressed in a symphony of purple and gray, and set out for Broadway. (R.L.)                 aunt … "You're so clever with all those things," said Aunt Ann. "And how's
       22. "I would like to use my remaining time with you to remind you that this         dear Irene?" Soames' smile died. (J.G.)
case is not a difficult one, it requires no minute sifting of complicated facts." (H.L.)         36. Difficult to believe it was so long ago, he felt young still! … With his
       23. Gordon rose and, picking up one of the shirts, gave it a minute                 white head and his loneliness he had remained young and green at heart. (J.G.)
examination. (F.S.F.)                                                                            37. He returned to teach in London, then went back to America, thereafter
       24. Nick's father ordered some water to be put on the stove, and while it           making regular, sometimes prolonged, visits to the English philosophical scene.
was heating he spoke to Nick. "This lady is going to have a baby, Nick," he                As he retained a tender relation with his parents, his face was occasionally,
said. "I know", said Nick. (E.H.)                                                          until his mother's death, to be seen in Ennistone, and his fame was kept green
       25. Judge Taylor nodded, and then Atticus did something I never saw him             among us. (I.M.)
do before or since, in public or in private: he unbuttoned his vest, unbuttoned                  38. There was June, the atom with flaming hair, who had climbed all over
his collar, loosened his tie, and took off his coat. (H.L.)                                him, twined and twisted herself about him – about his heart that was made to be
       26. In New York I eagerly accepted the soft job fate offered me: it                 the plaything and beloved resort of tiny helpless things. (J.G.)
consisted mainly of thinking up and editing perfume ads. (V.N.)                                  39. When in the first week of December he decided to go to Paris, he was
       27. "I'm afraid something's happened, sir. The German's gone. Sir."                 far from admitting that Irene's presence was influencing him. He had not been
"Gone?" "Hanged himself." "Good God! Hanged! But why?" "He's been very                     there two days before he owned that the wish to see her had been more than
funny these last three days." (J.G.)                                                       half the reason. (J.G.)
       28. As James had phrased it, "There it was!" No use to fuss! Nothing to                   40. She owned that to be alone in Paris was a little difficult, and yet, Paris
be had out of admitting that it had been a "nasty jar" – in the phraseology of the         was so full of its own life, it was often, she confessed, as innocuous as a desert.
day. (J.G.)                                                                                (J.G.)
       29. As he vanished into the bathroom his visitor's dark eyes roved nerv-                  41. "We'll meet at the Main Recruiting Office, then," said Jolly, "at
ously around the room, resting for a moment on a great English travelling bag              twelve o'clock." And, opening the window, he went out on to the terrace,
in the corner and on a family of thick silk shirts littered on the chairs amid im-         conforming to the creed which had made him retire when he surprised them in
pressive neckties and soft woolen socks. (F.S.F.)                                          the hall. (J.G.)

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