Лексические, грамматические и стилистические проблемы перевода. Калинкина С.К. - 5 стр.

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Упр. 2. Будьте внимательны при переводе
«ложных друзей переводчика»
1. He was afraid of what Annette was thinking of him, author of her
agonies
, afraid of the look of the baby, afraid of showing his disappointment
with the present and – the future. (J.G.)
2. There was no more doubt, only a sharp indignant agony
as though she
had been stabbed with a dagger of ice. (A.E.C.)
3. If you think that in such a delicate
matter as decoration I can bind
myself to the exact pound, I am afraid you are mistaken. (J.G.)
4. Ignorance is like a delicate
exotic fruit. Touch it and the bloom is
gone. (O.W.)
5. The announcement of Marjorie Ferrar's engagement to MacGown had
materially
changed the complexion of affairs. (J.G.)
6. Her complexion
was not good and her face was covered with blotches
that indicated ill health. (J.G.)
7. The tragic event of Bosinney's death altered the complexion
of every-
thing. (J.G.)
8. No woman should be quite accurate
about her age. (O.W.)
9. I don't play accurately
– anyone can play accurately – but I play with
wonderful expression. As far as the music is concerned, sentiment is my forte.
(O.W.)
10. "Don't be dramatic
, Lilian," he commented indifferently. "I'm not
such a loss to you if you have enough to live on." (Th.D.)
11. We said how strange it was that there should be a popular
notion that
Germans hadn't any sense of humour. (J.K.J.)
12. Indeed, in fifty seconds, his opinion of Manson, his whole idea of
Manson's usefulness to him, had undergone a swift and sudden revolution
.
(A.J.G.)
13. Her pain struck at my pain: we were back at the old routine
of hurting
each other. (G.G.)
14. He forgot most of the scandal
he was told ten minutes after he heard
it. (R.A.)
15. Arthur came across the room with velvet
tread. (E.L.V.)
16. A lady in a velvet
jacket was sitting there, with her eyes fixed on the
ground. (J.G.)
17. Behind a cold exterior
the most extraordinary events transpired in her
mind. (Sh.A.)
18. Turning to see at what she was looking he saw his own wife on
Bosinney's arm, coming from the conservatory
at the end of the room. (J.G.)
19. He was strongly built, with curly hair that seemed to show all the
vitality of a fine constitution.
(J.G.)
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20. It seemed as if one were talking to a genial host. (S.L.)
21. Encouraged by those gracious
words, and by my aunt's extending her
hand, he came forward.
22. He cut the cake and poured out the gingerbeer. He was more genial
than
Philip had ever known him, more at his ease, a man in his own home. (G.G.)
23. He had never cared for this room, hardly going into it from one year's
end to another, except to take cigars from the Japanese cabinet
in the corner. (J.G.)
24. She did something every child had done – she tried to put the evi-
dence of her offence away from her. But in this case she was no child hiding
stolen contraband
: she struck out at her victim. (H.L.)
25. Ruth Barlow had a gift (or should I call it a quality?) that renders most
men defeneless, and it was this that dispossessed Roger of his common sense, his
prudence and his worldly wisdom. This was the gift of pathos
. (W.S.M.)
26. Of course the water is very cold, but after a few seconds it seems to
coat the body in a kind of warm silvery skin, as if one had acquired the scales
of a merman. The challenged blood rejoices with a new strength. Yet, this is
my natural element
. (I.M.)
27. When, having by the end of the evening lost a good deal of money to
me, she said she would send me a cheque and never did, I could not but think that
I and not she should have worn a pathetic
expression when next we met. (W.S.M.)
28. He remained attentive to all her wishes: he took her to dine at restau-
rants, they went to the play together, he sent her flowers; he was sympathetic
and
charming. (W.S.M.)
29. He had not come down for lunch. Mother May had brought him a
tasty anonymous
soup which he had quite enjoyed. (I.M.)
30. …he was determined – I learnt that very soon – to do good, not to any
individual person but to a country, a continent, a world. Well, he was in his
element
now with the whole universe to improve. (G.G.)
31. I have no ambition
to play the part of a mother. (O.W.)
32. The sun was just rising as the march began – it was a gallant
sight.
(W.M.)
33. The impulse
to interfere leapt suddenly into Mr. Hoopdriver's mind.
(H.G.)
34. The house owned a copper door knocker of individual
design. (J.G.)
35. He strode along in his rough Norfolk jacket
, dusty boots, and battered
hat, without observing that people gazed at him rather blankly. (J.G.)
36. The spectacle
of his suffering convinced him that he had been a brute,
yet in the soul of him he could not see how or why. (J.L.)
37. Howells himself, a day labourer at the quarries, had been laid up three
months with pleurisy, for which no compensation was payable, and now Mrs.
Howells, a delicate
woman, already run off her feet attending to one invalid in
              Упр. 2. Будьте внимательны при переводе                                     20. It seemed as if one were talking to a genial host. (S.L.)
                    «ложных друзей переводчика»                                           21. Encouraged by those gracious words, and by my aunt's extending her
                                                                                    hand, he came forward.
        1. He was afraid of what Annette was thinking of him, author of her               22. He cut the cake and poured out the gingerbeer. He was more genial than
agonies, afraid of the look of the baby, afraid of showing his disappointment       Philip had ever known him, more at his ease, a man in his own home. (G.G.)
with the present and – the future. (J.G.)                                                 23. He had never cared for this room, hardly going into it from one year's
        2. There was no more doubt, only a sharp indignant agony as though she      end to another, except to take cigars from the Japanese cabinet in the corner. (J.G.)
had been stabbed with a dagger of ice. (A.E.C.)                                           24. She did something every child had done – she tried to put the evi-
        3. If you think that in such a delicate matter as decoration I can bind     dence of her offence away from her. But in this case she was no child hiding
myself to the exact pound, I am afraid you are mistaken. (J.G.)                     stolen contraband: she struck out at her victim. (H.L.)
        4. Ignorance is like a delicate exotic fruit. Touch it and the bloom is           25. Ruth Barlow had a gift (or should I call it a quality?) that renders most
gone. (O.W.)                                                                        men defeneless, and it was this that dispossessed Roger of his common sense, his
        5. The announcement of Marjorie Ferrar's engagement to MacGown had          prudence and his worldly wisdom. This was the gift of pathos. (W.S.M.)
materially changed the complexion of affairs. (J.G.)                                      26. Of course the water is very cold, but after a few seconds it seems to
        6. Her complexion was not good and her face was covered with blotches       coat the body in a kind of warm silvery skin, as if one had acquired the scales
that indicated ill health. (J.G.)                                                   of a merman. The challenged blood rejoices with a new strength. Yet, this is
        7. The tragic event of Bosinney's death altered the complexion of every-    my natural element. (I.M.)
thing. (J.G.)                                                                             27. When, having by the end of the evening lost a good deal of money to
        8. No woman should be quite accurate about her age. (O.W.)                  me, she said she would send me a cheque and never did, I could not but think that
        9. I don't play accurately – anyone can play accurately – but I play with   I and not she should have worn a pathetic expression when next we met. (W.S.M.)
wonderful expression. As far as the music is concerned, sentiment is my forte.            28. He remained attentive to all her wishes: he took her to dine at restau-
(O.W.)                                                                              rants, they went to the play together, he sent her flowers; he was sympathetic and
      10. "Don't be dramatic, Lilian," he commented indifferently. "I'm not         charming. (W.S.M.)
such a loss to you if you have enough to live on." (Th.D.)                                29. He had not come down for lunch. Mother May had brought him a
      11. We said how strange it was that there should be a popular notion that     tasty anonymous soup which he had quite enjoyed. (I.M.)
Germans hadn't any sense of humour. (J.K.J.)                                              30. …he was determined – I learnt that very soon – to do good, not to any
      12. Indeed, in fifty seconds, his opinion of Manson, his whole idea of        individual person but to a country, a continent, a world. Well, he was in his
Manson's usefulness to him, had undergone a swift and sudden revolution.            element now with the whole universe to improve. (G.G.)
(A.J.G.)                                                                                  31. I have no ambition to play the part of a mother. (O.W.)
      13. Her pain struck at my pain: we were back at the old routine of hurting          32. The sun was just rising as the march began – it was a gallant sight.
each other. (G.G.)                                                                  (W.M.)
      14. He forgot most of the scandal he was told ten minutes after he heard            33. The impulse to interfere leapt suddenly into Mr. Hoopdriver's mind.
it. (R.A.)                                                                          (H.G.)
      15. Arthur came across the room with velvet tread. (E.L.V.)                         34. The house owned a copper door knocker of individual design. (J.G.)
      16. A lady in a velvet jacket was sitting there, with her eyes fixed on the         35. He strode along in his rough Norfolk jacket, dusty boots, and battered
ground. (J.G.)                                                                      hat, without observing that people gazed at him rather blankly. (J.G.)
      17. Behind a cold exterior the most extraordinary events transpired in her          36. The spectacle of his suffering convinced him that he had been a brute,
mind. (Sh.A.)                                                                       yet in the soul of him he could not see how or why. (J.L.)
      18. Turning to see at what she was looking he saw his own wife on                   37. Howells himself, a day labourer at the quarries, had been laid up three
Bosinney's arm, coming from the conservatory at the end of the room. (J.G.)         months with pleurisy, for which no compensation was payable, and now Mrs.
      19. He was strongly built, with curly hair that seemed to show all the        Howells, a delicate woman, already run off her feet attending to one invalid in
vitality of a fine constitution. (J.G.)
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