Лексические, грамматические и стилистические проблемы перевода. Калинкина С.К. - 6 стр.

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addition to her work of cleaning Bethesda Chapel was called upon to make
provision
for another. (A.J.)
38. Swain and Koppel uttered a series
of inarticulate gurgles. Doctor
Caswell, exercising his professional self – control with a supreme effort, said:
"Congratulations, Mister Ellsworth…" (R.G.)
39. He was aware that in most cases they (his characters) were either
projections of his own personality or, in different forms, the antithesis
of it. the
Me and the Not Me. (L.P.H.)
40. Supposing those postcards are a lunatic's, and you are writing them to
yourself, doesn't it follow that you must be a lunatic
too? (L.P.H.)
41. But there were other objects of delight and interest claiming his
instant attention: there were quaint twisted candlesticks in the shape of snakes,
and a teapot fashioned like a china duck, out of whose open beak the tea was
supposed to come … And as he was admiring the colouring of the mandarin
duck and assigning a life-history to it, the voice of his aunt came from the
gooseberry garden without. (H.M.)
42. Seated in a row close to one another were three ladies – Aunts Ann,
Hester (the two Forsyte maids), and Juley (short for Julia), who not in first
youth had so far forgotten herself as to marry Septimus Small, a man of poor
constitution
. (J.G.)
43. He was no longer young, with hair going gray, and face – a narrower
replica
of his father's, with the same large drooping moustache – decidedly
worn. (J.G.)
44. Tom came and kissed Stella on the brow, stroked her hair lightly, then
put Zed down carefully on the chequered rug in the warm depression
between
Stella's legs and the edge of the sofa, where the little dog settled down quietly
as at a post of duty. (I.M.)
45. Tom raced upstairs. He thought, the sitting-room ceiling will come
down. But all was well. An interesting funnel at one end of the bath conveyed
the overflowing water into a depression
in the tiled floor where it ran away
harmlessly through a grating. (I.M.)
46. While Clement and the girls were away Louise had telephoned the
police and given them Anax's description; and the police were so understanding
and sympathetic
, and now policemen all over London would be looking for
Anax, and as he was such an unusual and beautiful dog they would be sure to
find him. (I.M.)
47. For two nights now Harvey had slept on the floor in the narrow space
between the extended bed and the bathroom door. The bed, on his mother's
insistence, remained extended all day, instead of being folded into its cupboard.
Progress
from the front door to the bathroom was over the bed. (I.M.)
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48. He longed to inform Irene of the taste in his mouth – she was so sym-
pathetic – but it would not be a distinguished thing to do; he rolled his tongue
round, and faintly smacked it against his palate. (J.G.)
49. She had been such a companion
to him ever since she was three years
old! And he loved her so! (J.G.)
50. He stayed a long time without moving, living over again those days
when he, too, had sat long hours watching the clock, waiting for the minutes to
pass – long hours full of the torments of uncertainty, and of a fierce, sweet ach-
ing; and the slow, delicious agony
of that season came back to him with its old
poignancy. (J.G.)
51. But when June came down, her face was pinched and piteous; there
was a strained, pathetic
look in her eyes. (J.G.)
52. "I suppose Irene's put her foot down – it's not material
to me." (J.G.)
53. Of her he thought more than of his own daughter, more than of them
all – of her with the dark, soft glance, the delicate
passive face, waiting for the
dead man, waiting even at that moment, perhaps, still and patient in the
sunlight. (J.G.)
54. Those privileged to be present at a family festival
of the Forsytes have
seen that charming and instructive sight – an uppermiddle class family in full
plumage. (J.G.)
55. Her hair, brushed in fine, high curves back from her forehead, was
going gray, like his own, and this grayness made the sudden vivid colour in her
cheeks painfully pathetic
. (J.G.)
56. I didn't want to embark on a routine
series of questions and answers.
What did it matter why I had come? I didn't know myself. (I.M.)
57. If this meeting of two declared enemies had in it something dramatic
,
neither perceived it at the moment. It was just intensely unpleasant to them
both. (J.G.)
58. He listened to her evidence with close attention. Her account of the
incident in Fleur's drawing-room seemed substantially correct
. (J.G.)
59. Mrs Davidson scanned his face. She had a dramatic
eagerness to see
that she had achieved the desired effect. (W.S.M.)
60. For a long moment we looked at each other in silence. Like a filling
glass I felt my soul rise into my eyes; and in the intense equilibrium
of the
meeting we both experienced almost a moment of contemplation. (I.M.)
61. "What's more, he wears combinations
. I saw it in his washing-book
one day when I was fetching him his hat. I think combinations
are rather awful,
don't you?" (E.W.)
62. Dr. Fagan greeted them with genial
condescension and found them
seats. (E.W.)
addition to her work of cleaning Bethesda Chapel was called upon to make                     48. He longed to inform Irene of the taste in his mouth – she was so sym-
provision for another. (A.J.)                                                          pathetic – but it would not be a distinguished thing to do; he rolled his tongue
      38. Swain and Koppel uttered a series of inarticulate gurgles. Doctor            round, and faintly smacked it against his palate. (J.G.)
Caswell, exercising his professional self – control with a supreme effort, said:             49. She had been such a companion to him ever since she was three years
"Congratulations, Mister Ellsworth…" (R.G.)                                            old! And he loved her so! (J.G.)
      39. He was aware that in most cases they (his characters) were either                  50. He stayed a long time without moving, living over again those days
projections of his own personality or, in different forms, the antithesis of it. the   when he, too, had sat long hours watching the clock, waiting for the minutes to
Me and the Not Me. (L.P.H.)                                                            pass – long hours full of the torments of uncertainty, and of a fierce, sweet ach-
      40. Supposing those postcards are a lunatic's, and you are writing them to       ing; and the slow, delicious agony of that season came back to him with its old
yourself, doesn't it follow that you must be a lunatic too? (L.P.H.)                   poignancy. (J.G.)
      41. But there were other objects of delight and interest claiming his                  51. But when June came down, her face was pinched and piteous; there
instant attention: there were quaint twisted candlesticks in the shape of snakes,      was a strained, pathetic look in her eyes. (J.G.)
and a teapot fashioned like a china duck, out of whose open beak the tea was                 52. "I suppose Irene's put her foot down – it's not material to me." (J.G.)
supposed to come … And as he was admiring the colouring of the mandarin                      53. Of her he thought more than of his own daughter, more than of them
duck and assigning a life-history to it, the voice of his aunt came from the           all – of her with the dark, soft glance, the delicate passive face, waiting for the
gooseberry garden without. (H.M.)                                                      dead man, waiting even at that moment, perhaps, still and patient in the
      42. Seated in a row close to one another were three ladies – Aunts Ann,          sunlight. (J.G.)
Hester (the two Forsyte maids), and Juley (short for Julia), who not in first                54. Those privileged to be present at a family festival of the Forsytes have
youth had so far forgotten herself as to marry Septimus Small, a man of poor           seen that charming and instructive sight – an uppermiddle class family in full
constitution. (J.G.)                                                                   plumage. (J.G.)
      43. He was no longer young, with hair going gray, and face – a narrower                55. Her hair, brushed in fine, high curves back from her forehead, was
replica of his father's, with the same large drooping moustache – decidedly            going gray, like his own, and this grayness made the sudden vivid colour in her
worn. (J.G.)                                                                           cheeks painfully pathetic. (J.G.)
      44. Tom came and kissed Stella on the brow, stroked her hair lightly, then             56. I didn't want to embark on a routine series of questions and answers.
put Zed down carefully on the chequered rug in the warm depression between             What did it matter why I had come? I didn't know myself. (I.M.)
Stella's legs and the edge of the sofa, where the little dog settled down quietly            57. If this meeting of two declared enemies had in it something dramatic,
as at a post of duty. (I.M.)                                                           neither perceived it at the moment. It was just intensely unpleasant to them
      45. Tom raced upstairs. He thought, the sitting-room ceiling will come           both. (J.G.)
down. But all was well. An interesting funnel at one end of the bath conveyed                58. He listened to her evidence with close attention. Her account of the
the overflowing water into a depression in the tiled floor where it ran away           incident in Fleur's drawing-room seemed substantially correct. (J.G.)
harmlessly through a grating. (I.M.)                                                         59. Mrs Davidson scanned his face. She had a dramatic eagerness to see
      46. While Clement and the girls were away Louise had telephoned the              that she had achieved the desired effect. (W.S.M.)
police and given them Anax's description; and the police were so understanding               60. For a long moment we looked at each other in silence. Like a filling
and sympathetic, and now policemen all over London would be looking for                glass I felt my soul rise into my eyes; and in the intense equilibrium of the
Anax, and as he was such an unusual and beautiful dog they would be sure to            meeting we both experienced almost a moment of contemplation. (I.M.)
find him. (I.M.)                                                                             61. "What's more, he wears combinations. I saw it in his washing-book
      47. For two nights now Harvey had slept on the floor in the narrow space         one day when I was fetching him his hat. I think combinations are rather awful,
between the extended bed and the bathroom door. The bed, on his mother's               don't you?" (E.W.)
insistence, remained extended all day, instead of being folded into its cupboard.            62. Dr. Fagan greeted them with genial condescension and found them
Progress from the front door to the bathroom was over the bed. (I.M.)                  seats. (E.W.)


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