Лексические, грамматические и стилистические проблемы перевода. Калинкина С.К. - 7 стр.

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63. Why was it, Paul wondered, that everyone he met seemed to
specialize in this form of autobiography? He supposed he must have a
sympathetic
air. (E.W.)
64. … only his intimate friends and a few specially favoured pupils knew
that behind his mild and professional exterior
he concealed an ardent ambition
to serve in the public life of his generation. (E.W.)
65. Dingy gave him a large slice of cake, and he hobbled out surrounded
by a sympathetic
crowd. (E.W.)
66. Fresh from her triumph
over "that little snob", fluttered by the sudden
appearance of her past, and confronted with her present, she was not in
complete possession of her head. (J.G.)
67. Julia was too sensible to argue; and in any case she understood only
too well, for she'd experienced exactly the same the day before when she'd sat
on a bar-stool there, alone, feeling … well, feeling "all full up", as Brenda had
so economically
phrased it. (C.D.)
68. The silent weeping had subsided into intermittent snuffling as Julia
finished reading the agonized
and agonizing pages. (C.D.)
69. The Administrator unlocked a filing-cabinet
beside her and produced
a green folder marked "Brooks, E"; Morse looked through the half-dozen sheets
it contained. (C.D.)
70. He felt like a prince returned from exile, and his lonely heart
burgeoned in the geniality
in which it bathed. (J.L.)
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1. His eyes moved to the chair over which she had thrown some of her
clothes. A petticoat string dangled to the floor. One boot stood upright, its limp
upper fallen down: the fellow
of it lay upon its side. (J.J.)
2. It meant they had to have regular sit-down meals at the proper times,
whereas if they'd been alone they could just have asked Kate if she wouldn't
have minded bringing them a tray wherever they were. And meal-times
now
that the strain was over were rather a trial. (K.M.)
3. It was nearly dinner-time when he got back, and their meal
was laid in
the trader's parlour. (W.S.M.)
4. Manson slung his bag up and climbed into the battered gig behind
a
tall, angular black horse. (A.J.C.)
5. He would cheer up somehow, began to laugh again, and drew
skeletons all over the slate, before his eyes were dry
. (Ch. D.)
6. Gripping his bag, Manson leaped from the train and walked quickly
down the platform, seeking eagerly for some sign of welcome. (A.J.C.)
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7. "Thank you," said Margaret, feeling large and awkward and clumsy in
all her limbs
. (J.G.)
8. Soames, with his set lips and his square chin, was not unlike
a bull-
dog. (J.G.)
9. "Well, I shall go to Soames and tell him he must leave you alone.
What does he want at his age?" "A child. It's not unnatural
." (J.G.)
10. For the last days she had resented
more and more the way this case
had taken charge of her. She had initiated it, and it had completely deprived her
of initiative. (J.G.)
11. She hated
old, ugly people near her, but Sophie was so efficient… it
would be madness to get rid of her.(A.H.)
12. "But about this libel. Can't you all say you are sorry – why put money
into the lawyers' pockets?" "She won't, unless
I do, and I won't unless she
does." (J.G.)
13. "You wouldn't approve of the suppression of any book on the ground
of mere morals?" "I can't tell you unless
I see the book." (J.G.)
14. If, like Roger Charing, you were a strong, hefty fellow with plenty of
money, it was almost inevitable that you should say to yourself: I must stand
between the hazards of life and this helpless little thing
, oh, how wonderful it
would be to take the sadness out of those big and lovely eyes! (W.S.M.)
15. – But where is he now?… He must be somewhere. And if he's outside at
night he could die of exposure
. – We have exceptionally warm nights lately. (I.M.)
16. The clock of the bedroom door, the rasp of a match, the pad of feet in
the corridor – many nights they had quietly woken me, and I did not get to
sleep again until
she was back. (C.P. S.)
17. I was reading so intently that I did notice the steps on the staircase,
until
there came a quick repeated knock on my door. (C.P.S.)
18. "Don't laugh at me, Thomas." He shifted his long limbs
uneasily. "I
must seem a bit dumb to you, but I know when you're kidding." (G.G.)
19. "I don't dislike
you, Granger. I've been blind to a lot of things…" "Oh,
you and me, we're cat and dog. But thanks for the sympathy." (G.G.)
20. I don't think
I will come along, Michael – Old Forsyte's probably
there. (J.G.)
21. Actually the place bore a dejected resemblance to the Haze home… It
was the same sort of dull gray frame affair
with a shingled roof and dull green
awnings; and the rooms, though smaller and furnished in a more consistent
plush-and-plate style, were arranged in much the same order. (V.N.)
22. He had left his wife sitting on the sofa in the drawing-room, her hands
crossed in her lap, manifestly waiting for him to go out. This was not unusual
.
It happened, in fact, every day. (J.G.)
      63. Why was it, Paul wondered, that everyone he met seemed to                          7. "Thank you," said Margaret, feeling large and awkward and clumsy in
specialize in this form of autobiography? He supposed he must have a                 all her limbs. (J.G.)
sympathetic air. (E.W.)                                                                      8. Soames, with his set lips and his square chin, was not unlike a bull-
      64. … only his intimate friends and a few specially favoured pupils knew       dog. (J.G.)
that behind his mild and professional exterior he concealed an ardent ambition               9. "Well, I shall go to Soames and tell him he must leave you alone.
to serve in the public life of his generation. (E.W.)                                What does he want at his age?" "A child. It's not unnatural." (J.G.)
      65. Dingy gave him a large slice of cake, and he hobbled out surrounded              10. For the last days she had resented more and more the way this case
by a sympathetic crowd. (E.W.)                                                       had taken charge of her. She had initiated it, and it had completely deprived her
      66. Fresh from her triumph over "that little snob", fluttered by the sudden    of initiative. (J.G.)
appearance of her past, and confronted with her present, she was not in                    11. She hated old, ugly people near her, but Sophie was so efficient… it
complete possession of her head. (J.G.)                                              would be madness to get rid of her.(A.H.)
      67. Julia was too sensible to argue; and in any case she understood only             12. "But about this libel. Can't you all say you are sorry – why put money
too well, for she'd experienced exactly the same the day before when she'd sat       into the lawyers' pockets?" "She won't, unless I do, and I won't unless she
on a bar-stool there, alone, feeling … well, feeling "all full up", as Brenda had    does." (J.G.)
so economically phrased it. (C.D.)                                                         13. "You wouldn't approve of the suppression of any book on the ground
      68. The silent weeping had subsided into intermittent snuffling as Julia       of mere morals?" "I can't tell you unless I see the book." (J.G.)
finished reading the agonized and agonizing pages. (C.D.)                                  14. If, like Roger Charing, you were a strong, hefty fellow with plenty of
      69. The Administrator unlocked a filing-cabinet beside her and produced        money, it was almost inevitable that you should say to yourself: I must stand
a green folder marked "Brooks, E"; Morse looked through the half-dozen sheets        between the hazards of life and this helpless little thing, oh, how wonderful it
it contained. (C.D.)                                                                 would be to take the sadness out of those big and lovely eyes! (W.S.M.)
      70. He felt like a prince returned from exile, and his lonely heart                  15. – But where is he now?… He must be somewhere. And if he's outside at
burgeoned in the geniality in which it bathed. (J.L.)                                night he could die of exposure. – We have exceptionally warm nights lately. (I.M.)
                                                                                           16. The clock of the bedroom door, the rasp of a match, the pad of feet in
   Упр. 3. Используйте лексические и лексико-грамматические                          the corridor – many nights they had quietly woken me, and I did not get to
     трансформации при переводе следующих предложений                                sleep again until she was back. (C.P. S.)
                                                                                           17. I was reading so intently that I did notice the steps on the staircase,
        1. His eyes moved to the chair over which she had thrown some of her         until there came a quick repeated knock on my door. (C.P.S.)
clothes. A petticoat string dangled to the floor. One boot stood upright, its limp         18. "Don't laugh at me, Thomas." He shifted his long limbs uneasily. "I
upper fallen down: the fellow of it lay upon its side. (J.J.)                        must seem a bit dumb to you, but I know when you're kidding." (G.G.)
        2. It meant they had to have regular sit-down meals at the proper times,           19. "I don't dislike you, Granger. I've been blind to a lot of things…" "Oh,
whereas if they'd been alone they could just have asked Kate if she wouldn't         you and me, we're cat and dog. But thanks for the sympathy." (G.G.)
have minded bringing them a tray wherever they were. And meal-times now                    20. I don't think I will come along, Michael – Old Forsyte's probably
that the strain was over were rather a trial. (K.M.)                                 there. (J.G.)
        3. It was nearly dinner-time when he got back, and their meal was laid in          21. Actually the place bore a dejected resemblance to the Haze home… It
the trader's parlour. (W.S.M.)                                                       was the same sort of dull gray frame affair with a shingled roof and dull green
        4. Manson slung his bag up and climbed into the battered gig behind a        awnings; and the rooms, though smaller and furnished in a more consistent
tall, angular black horse. (A.J.C.)                                                  plush-and-plate style, were arranged in much the same order. (V.N.)
        5. He would cheer up somehow, began to laugh again, and drew                       22. He had left his wife sitting on the sofa in the drawing-room, her hands
skeletons all over the slate, before his eyes were dry. (Ch. D.)                     crossed in her lap, manifestly waiting for him to go out. This was not unusual.
        6. Gripping his bag, Manson leaped from the train and walked quickly         It happened, in fact, every day. (J.G.)
down the platform, seeking eagerly for some sign of welcome. (A.J.C.)

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